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She Went Out The Door

You filled the hole that pierced my soul,
I promised that I’d find, someone to take a run,
But our love must just be in my mind,
Even though we had all that fun,

All I want to do is show my love,
You the only one I didn’t want to go,
You’re my girl with none above,
But for some reason my love just didn’t show,

When you stand next to me,
Is it your stare that pulls me in,
I fell in love and I only wanted you,
I just want out love, to be true.

Then you did, just what I feared,
The girl I loved, you disappeared,
When I heard of it, my heart just broke,
I didn’t want it all, to just be a joke.

You’re the one I’d do anything for,
Walk with her on a sandy shore,
Wouldn’t even talk, I’d just walk and stare
Wanting to ask, but would never dare,

It kills me that I can’t just come out,
Wanna tell you what I’m all about,
Every time I see you, I just wanna shout,
I’d love you forever without a doubt,

I stay around just to see your face,
Walk a foot or walk a mile,
I’ve gone with you from place to place,
Just stay around to see your smile,

I keep on writing never giving them out,
Some stupid reason trying to take the easy route,
I’ve lost a great love once more,
Just sitting and waiting, till she went out the door.

Wrote this Today
Comments, Additions, Revisions, anything is gladly accepted

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sarahelizabeth offline Verified User (2 months, 4 weeks) Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (11 minutes after post)

its pretty. is it a song or just a poem? i think its really good tho.

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whaples201 offline Verified User (3 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 17 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (13 minutes after post)

1/2 and 1/2 really goes to this tune * this song is offensive, and got some of the lyrics/stanzas from it:)*http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z5UCZt20la8&feature=user

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whaples201 offline Verified User (3 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 17 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (14 minutes after post)

uggg…. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z5UCZt…, and it kinda changed since i started, i revised, but yea, i got some good lines from his offensive songs:O

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Chivas offline Verified User (3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (14 hours, 32 minutes after post)

Awesome man Im gona staet posting mine 2 lol

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Tzubake offline Verified User (4 months, 4 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 21 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (1 day, 3 hours after post)

That was great.. it made me cry.. really.. I felt everything…

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~Break-taking-bitsh~ offline Verified User (5 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 13 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (1 day, 14 hours after post)

Hey whaples! I love this, making me think to be honest…

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whaples201 offline Verified User (3 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 17 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (1 day, 15 hours after post)

Cool thanks, any suggestions or additions from anyone?

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~Break-taking-bitsh~ offline Verified User (5 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 13 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (1 day, 15 hours after post)

Sorry, I think it shouldn’t be messed with, so, no, no suggestions.

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whaples201 offline Verified User (3 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 17 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (1 day, 23 hours after post)

:O thanks

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (5 days, 1 hour after post)

When im done with some more school work ill work on a poem or two

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