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A poem.

let me know what you think, its called My Healing:

I stood still once and looked at the world

I saw everyone moving restless, moving around trying to accomplish

I thought to my self why am I standing still? why am I not active?

Its because I’m tired

I moved as they did once, I came out with nothing

I hate giving up, I even hate the thought of it

It drowned me out of my will and drowned my soul of its life

I’ve been low for so long, I tried to get higher

but I only got disappointment, my wings are broken

Now all I do is stand here defeated. Waiting for my healing. I only move under a restricted ceiling

My healing is the key

its simple what it is, it is a she

For me that’s all I need. I’ll give everything for one thing

It comes in a package of love, loyalty, belief and acceptance for who I be.

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the.sophenator offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
Sydney, 02, AU | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (5 minutes after post)

That’s really interesting…well done!

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (13 minutes after post)

Thanks.

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shol'vah offline Verified User (9 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Anchorage, AK, US | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (2 hours, 29 minutes after post)

I like what you say here, thanks for sharing it.

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (1 day, 17 hours after post)

Thank you.

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Majid edited this post 2 months, 3 weeks ago. Read the previous text »

A poem.

Its called My Healing:

I stood still once and looked at the world

I saw everyone moving restless, moving around trying to accomplish

I thought to my self why am I standing still? why am I not active?

Its because i’m tired

I moved as they did once, I came out with nothing

I hate giving up, I even hate the thought of it

It drowned me out of my will and drowned my soul of its life

I’ve been low for so long, I tried to get higher

but I only got disappointment, my wings are broken

Now all I do is stand here defeated. Waiting for my healing. I only move under a restricted ceiling

My healing is the key

its simple what it is, it is a she

For me that’s all I need. I’ll give everything for one thing

It comes in a package of love, loyalty, belief and acceptance for who I be.

Majid edited this post 2 months, 3 weeks ago. Read the previous text »

A poem, Its called My Healing:

I stood still once and looked at the world

I saw everyone moving restless, moving around trying to accomplish

I thought to my self why am I standing still? why am I not active?

Its because i’m tired

I moved as they did once, I came out with nothing

I hate giving up, I even hate the thought of it

It drowned me out of my will and drowned my soul of its life

I’ve been low for so long, I tried to get higher

but I only got disappointment, my wings are broken

Now all I do is stand here defeated. Waiting for my healing. I only move under a restricted ceiling

My healing is the key

its simple what it is, it is a she

For me that’s all I need. I’ll give everything for one thing

It comes in a package of love, loyalty, belief and acceptance for who I be.

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