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Interrogation of a Raindrop

Talk and tell me riddles,
Somehow I will know the mean,
Speak in quipes and phrases,
Then don’t tell me where they lead,
Cause I can see right through you,
Little raindrop,
Pass me by.

I’d save you if I could,
You know you’ll dissappear the same,
Just tell me all your secrets,
All the secrets of the rain,
Explain to me your point of view,
Oh little raindrop,
Pass me by.

I catch you on my finger,
On my forehead, in my eye,
Interrogate a droplet,
To see if I could learn to fly,
It said just stop your falling,
Little raindrop,
Passed me, bye.

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