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Need help rewriting these paragraphs for my marketing class using the same concept.

our teacher has given us an assignment to rewrite this whole thing. I’m really stuck and this stinks. Marketing is not my major. Is there anyone who has a heart that can help me out here.

Are you a hair salon owner or an independent stylist looking to build up your client base? Look no further. We have helped hundreds of hair salons get more traffic through the doors. The best part about our program is that it is absolutely free. We do not ask hair salon owners or independent stylist for one cent if they meet our criteria.

One of our account executives will contact you. Due to the recent success and the overwhelming demand of our free promotions it may take us a little bit of extra time to get back to you. Thank you for your understanding and we are looking forward to the possibility of working with you and helping you
expand your business.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (10 minutes after post)

I have never studied marketing but it sounds well written to me.

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1 year, 2 months ago (11 minutes after post)

Thats because the teacher wrote it. Now we have to change it keeping the same concept.

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Trying to rewrite this for my marketing class.

Our teacher has given us an assignment to rewrite this whole thing. I’m really stuck and this stinks. Marketing is not my major. Is there anyone who has a heart that can help me out here.

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Are you a hair salon owner or an independent stylist looking to build up your client base? Look no further. We have helped hundreds of hair salons get more traffic through the doors. The best part about our program is that it is absolutely free. We do not ask hair salon owners or independent stylist for one cent if they meet our criteria.

One of our account executives will contact you. Due to the recent success and the overwhelming demand of our free promotions it may take us a little bit of extra time to get back to you. Thank you for your understanding and we are looking forward to the possibility of working with you and helping you
expand your business.

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