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whats the concepts…

Here are the paragraphs. My teacher wrote this but we have to rewrite it using the same concepts.

Are you a hair salon owner or an independent stylist looking to build up your client base? Look no further. We have helped hundreds of hair salons get more traffic through the doors. The best part about our program is that it is absolutely free. We do not ask hair salon owners or independent stylist
for one cent if they meet our criteria.

One of our account executives will contact you. Due to the recent success and the overwhelming demand of our free promotions it may take us a little bit of extra time to get back to you. Thank you for your understanding and we are looking forward to the possibility of working with you and helping you
expand your business.

so you have to come up with an ad campaign. I wont do it for you sorry How will you learn if people do your work. but you can run some ideas past me if you want.

“walk in who you were, walk out who you are.”

Well I’m failing my marketing class. I was hoping someone can help me or give me some pointers.

find a concept and build upon it.

I don’t know where and how to start. I ask my older brother and he was of no help. This is due on mon and this is the only thing that can save me from totally failing marketing.

do you have a book or a guideline of what your instructor expects?

nope, she just told us to rewrite these paragraphs using the same concepts. I really don’t understand how thats possible when she wrote it so perfectly.

Are you a hair salon owner or an independent stylist looking to build up your client base? Look no further. We have helped hundreds of hair salons get more traffic through the doors. The best part about our program is that it is absolutely free. We do not ask hair salon owners or independent stylist
for one cent if they meet our criteria. (Are you a motivated go getter who self sufficiently cut’s hair for a living. Could you use a boost to your client base with little to no punch to your wallet. This is a special offer and as such has had a high demand. We apologize in advance for any slowness or delay in contact. A representative will contact you as soon as one is available. We thank you kindly in you patience and your willingness to entertain our proposal. how about something like that.)

One of our account executives will contact you. Due to the recent success and the overwhelming demand of our free promotions it may take us a little bit of extra time to get back to you. Thank you for your understanding and we are looking forward to the possibility of working with you and helping you
expand your business.

That was fast, your ever take marketing?

some I just like to write.

wow, you are awesome.

Ok, We still have to keep Salon owner & independent stylist in the first paragraph.

so change where it says cutting hair to those words.

Were basically promoting a business, so were graded on how professional it sounds.

you have a basic idea and remember in marketing it is all about meeting your demographic audience.

Sadly but true, Thanks so much for helping me.

very welcome. remember less people cut their own hair than defend themselves in a court of law that’s a wide demographic. Use your imagination.

I will, thank you