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Dreadful Nights…

Has anyone ever read this book? I’d like a review.

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Chriskao #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (2 minutes after post)

Your already trying to put my story up

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Anonymous #
1 year, 2 months ago (3 minutes after post)

What are you talking about? who are you?

Chriskao #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (3 minutes after post)

Blah

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Chriskao #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (5 minutes after post)

Why did you go anonymous

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Anonymous #
1 year, 2 months ago (5 minutes after post)

Its default for me sorry.

Chriskao #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (6 minutes after post)

Eh true so writing all day sounds pretty exciting

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Anonymous #
1 year, 2 months ago (6 minutes after post)

It will be. I’m starting now.

Chriskao #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (7 minutes after post)

How far do you think you’ll get by just guessing

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Anonymous #
1 year, 2 months ago (9 minutes after post)

Possibly to powerplant.

Chriskao #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (10 minutes after post)

Oh i sure do hope you get that far

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Anonymous #
1 year, 2 months ago (13 minutes after post)

OFF TOPIC
Hey, who here likes Heroes?
The 3-hour season premiere is n the 22nd!!!

Chriskao #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (31 minutes after post)

Not really but do you really think you can get that far today

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Anonymous #
1 year, 2 months ago (33 minutes after post)

yeah

Chriskao #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (34 minutes after post)

What is everything they need to do before getting to the powerplant without it being well rushed by tonight.

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Chriskao #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (40 minutes after post)

hello?

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Anonymous #
1 year, 2 months ago (43 minutes after post)

Yeah
Hospital.
Luxor.
C.A.T.//monsters
Ryiu
C.A.T.
Hotels
Stratosphere
Desert
Powerplant

Chriskao #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (45 minutes after post)

Okay now let me ask you this how far will you get by the time i get home.
And how many paragraphs are you planning to write for each of those
events so it doesn’t sound rushed

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Anonymous #
1 year, 2 months ago (48 minutes after post)

By the time you get home? Hotels maybe.

It just depends on the event, I don’t want it to spend 20 paragrphs on the desert, as it would with a hord of monsters attacking.

Chriskao #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (51 minutes after post)

Well i know that but i also know that you don’t want to rush it like the rough draft that you wrote the first time and make it sound bad so i was really just asking for a guess and hotels that’s cool.

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Anonymous #
1 year, 2 months ago (1 hour, 4 minutes after post)

what about hotels?

Chapter 9: Stranded Hero
Hospital — 2 pages (end of chapter

Chapter 10: Fight for Survival
Luxor — 3 pages
C.A.T.//Jerraku//monsters — 5 pages
Ryiu — 1 page
C.A.T. — 2 pages

Chapter 11: Time
Hotels — 8 pages
Stratosphere — 3 pages

Chapter 12: Powerless
Desert — 2 pages
Powerplant — 4 pages
Confrontation (gerrix&ryiu) — 3 pages
Explosion — 3

Chapter 13: Crash
Crash — 2 pages
Battle — 3 pages
Stratosphere top — 1 page
Ryiu battle — 5 pages

Chapter 14: Civilized
Rescue — 3 pages
An Old Friend — 2 pages
Nurse — 1 page
Love stuff (Ryiu&Selcia//Gerrix&Ciria//Jerraku&Roy[lol]) — 4 pages

Chapter 15: Satelite
Awake — 2 pages
Shadow battle — 3 pages
Prisoner — 4 pages
Aiyashi — 2 pages

Chapter 16: Fin
Escape to controls — 3 pagees
Escape from stratosphere(lance) — 3 pages
Taking control of satelite — 2 pages
Last communications — 2 pages
Escape pods — 1 page
Fall to japan/Vegas — 3 pages
Epilogue — 2 pages

So with our now…. 93pages we’re looking at about a [93+83=176] 176 pages

Chriskao #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (1 hour, 9 minutes after post)

Isn’t that somewhat of a short book i’m almost certain you’ll write more than that with only ninety three pages left that story would be rushed i mean look at the 83 pages you already have and we just barely saw a monster not that long ago now you know there will be more pages because you still have a lot to write about.
And you know it

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Anonymous #
1 year, 2 months ago (1 hour, 13 minutes after post)

We HAVE the 93, not 83.

I’m just saying that I’ll be spending about this amny pages on each specific thing in the chapter, theres still the little crap that explains in between events like in POWERLESS for example, I have to write some stuff in between confrontation and explosion, I can’t just skip that. So yeah, with about 2 pages in between each subject then we’re looking at 58 extra pages.

(Current pgs)93 + (Objective pages)83 = (main idea pages)176 + (detail)58 = 234page book

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