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My last song on the Album and i don’t want to mess

this up.Its a Song about our environment our life here on Earth .The Way we treat this planet .Its such a beautiful song music wise i don’t want to mess this up.If you can help on this one i will be very grateful. Let the World see me as i am
And i see the World as it is
Icebergs are melting and rivers are dead
Pollution took over my beloved world
What have you done to my World?
Prying and Crying wont help.

Forest are dwindling and choking of Dust
???anything what comes in mind about pollution and our enviroment PLESE PLEASE its the last one on the albulm

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Barbyman offline Verified User (2 years, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 6 months ago (15 hours, 31 minutes after post)

lyrics wise suggestions please.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 6 months ago (1 day, 11 hours after post)

1st Breath its true Rivers should actually flow,but in this Song the rivers are dead like polluted and filled with Algae and other poisonous Stuff .I’m glad i do get Criticism.words and Music for this Song are finished Last recording will be this Week and hopefully the Album is up and running before Christmas…

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 6 months ago (1 day, 15 hours after post)

omg there is only one good song on what ppl are doing to this world and that will be the one and only what is called the earth song by micheal jackson

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 6 months ago (1 day, 15 hours after post)

lill wait till you hear mine……

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 6 months ago (1 day, 15 hours after post)

i will do but there nobody up there on the par of mj

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (4 days, 1 hour after post)

lol

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