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Open up and smile!

I sit here as the sun does set,
I’m alone, but it’s better yet.
I open up and smile,
and ooh, can I tell you it’s worthwhile.

Do you wanna come and sit by me?
Just lay back and stare at the big blue sea?
Come on and smile, just be free,
Throw up your arms and stamp your feet.
So open up your eyes,
Stare with me at the pretty orange skies.
Just listen here and open up,
You don’t gotta be tough,
Just let out your sweet, sweet smile,
Ooh, that will take me for miles and miles.

Come on, we don’t need a reason.
Anytime of day or any season.
Just throw yourself and laugh with me,
Ooh, laugh with me, so absorbed with glee.
So open up and smile,
Yeah, we’ll be here awhile,
We don’t need no style,
No, cause we ain’t on no trial.
Yeah, baby, we’re just free.

So do me a favor here,
Forget about the tears and fears.
Sit down on the pier,
Throw rocks with me down the frontier.

Oh, so open up your mind,
Please, you’ve got nothing to hide.
Oh baby, sit here at my side,
I promise, this is no lie.
I could sit with you all day and night.

Open up your heart,
the seal is all the keeps us apart.
The scale is rising right off the charts,
I swear babe, I will never depart.
I’ll have my love willingly impart.
Here, we can make a fresh start,
All you gotta do is play your part.

Oh, please open up your soul,
it’s the last thing keeping us from our goal.
I swear there is no hole,
There is no trace of any coal.
Please, oh please, your beauty I will extol.
I accept you as a whole,
Come with me on a little stroll,
There is not toll,
come on, lets roll.
You can have it, you’re totally in control.

So come on,
Open up and Smile!
Let it all out for awhile.
Not another soul for miles,
We’re alone on our little isle,
We’ve got our own style.
But that’s okay.
We’re happy with each other.
That’s all one could ask for.
So come on, please my baby,
Open up and smile.
Ooh, open up and smile awhile now.

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angel♥ offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 36 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (11 minutes after post)

wow! that was really good!
you’re soo amazing at writing :O

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Me as you know offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 6 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (13 minutes after post)

Not really… Haha, but thanks. :D
Plus, adding the rhymes = bad flow, I don’t like them. XP I used to be better with the rhyming… Now I’m really bad…

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (16 minutes after post)

haha i think you are :D the rhyming sounded fine to me!
i wish i could wirte poems =( ahhaha

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Middleton, K1, GB | 1 year, 2 months ago (18 minutes after post)

*beams* Aww that is absolutely brilliant! I love your poems! and you always said they sucked to me, they are beautiful and soo well written!

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (33 minutes after post)

They do suck, that’s the thing. And I’m convinced by that until I am satisfied that they are the best I can do.

I’m sure you could write, Angel. Just put you’re heart into it and it will turn out great. I promise. :)

And thanks Amber. I’ll get better though. These are junk so far. :P

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (35 minutes after post)

junk? they suck?! WHAT? sooo not true. lol
i think theyre amazing!! =)

and yeah.. ive kinda tried to write poems before.. didnt turn out to well XD

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Amber Soul offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
Middleton, K1, GB | 1 year, 2 months ago (8 hours, 51 minutes after post)

Liiiies, they are brilliant! NOT JUNK!

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (22 hours, 19 minutes after post)

wow very impressive.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (22 hours, 24 minutes after post)

Thanks Mike, glad you liked it. :)

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