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Another poem.

I’m holding on whatever to keep me from the voices
Drowning out the pain by a dozen of bad choices
Not walking a straight line but I know that I’m still going
Stuck upon the zig zag as the line just keeps unfolding
Jadded edges crumble as they fall into a crack
I don’t know what’s behind me because I’m afraid to look back
A burden’s chasing after me and haunting all my dreams
Pretend that I’m still sleeping as I hear the echoed screams
Until another beam falls down and makes me turn around
Pretending that I’ve lost something so something can be found
The circle just continues until I find myself agaze
And realize that my life is just another troubled maze

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no_spo0n offline Verified User (1 year, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Brisbane, 04, AU | 1 year, 2 months ago (34 minutes after post)

Beautiful. I love it.

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Musicsoccer12 offline Verified User (1 year, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (1 day, 15 hours after post)

it rox and like ur other poems is so real

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Starlight offline Verified User (2 years) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Halifax, NS, CA | 1 year, 1 month ago (2 days, 20 hours after post)

Awsome poem, there is alot of emotion in it. :)

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (1 week, 4 days after post)

Amazing. Really enjoyed it.

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DrinkAwayMyPain offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (1 week, 5 days after post)

rather emotional .

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