There vioces sharp against all other nioses of the waking day
A feather falls gently to the ground
lying softly on the green duey grass
waiting for an unknowing child to come
The soft glow of light hiting there backs
The world awaking at there shrill tones
But one with a sweet vioce hovers gently on
Until the day is set
Until light is back
Day is bright
And people know that there is life
A music so soft and sweet the changing rytmes
Shrill and soft
If there is danger
It is not shown
Or meerly masked
Beneath the gentle wings
These creatures come every time
The world begins again
Signs are left of gods creation
An unsuspecting child
Will find them
One bye One
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That is good poetry :) I am not usually to keen on poems based on nature but I did like it :)
I am posting the poem I just wrote although it won’t make too much sense to anyone other than the person it’s for and I know it’s s**t :) lol.
You get me through the day,
But often make me cry all night.
I long to talk with you whenever you’re gone,
But when you’re here I know not what to say.
I read your writing daily and scan your page for your feelings,
But the minute something changed I was cut up.
know you arn’t mine,But please don’t be someone elses.
I shouldn’t ask you that, I don’t have the right,
But now all I want from you is a smile.
I never stop worrying and i’m constantly crying,
But when you ask me to stop I want to but it just got harder.
I have been lost for words,But have had the chances to show you.
I am more broken than ever and these words they arn’t flowing,
But I am risking my life to express how I feel.
MUFC 4 LYF (franky) wrote:
? who is it for?
:P may i ask
Yes or course :) It’s for my friend James who I am on love with…http://help.com/post/199717-james-i-fell-for-him-and-i-don82
That’s a post about him on the off chance that you are interested….
MUFC 4 LYF (franky) wrote:
ok. :Pjames is a lcuky guy anyway lol
MUFC 4 LYF (franky) wrote:
I like to write…i dont know why…but i just…doits like…taking my emotions out…i dont like to talk much really…but i love to write…about emotions…:P i dont know if that makes sense.. =/
Not really…..I am rather obsessive…lol…Oh and by the wya he loves me too :D
MUFC 4 LYF (franky) wrote:
:Di wouldnt mind if someone was obsessive with me… =/
I bet someone is :)
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (1 hour, 44 minutes after post)
hi r u still here??
:O :O
you never told me you could write poetry!!!!!!!!! :O
that was soo good! :D
Jóse--- invited 1 user to read this post 1 year, 2 months ago.
That’s some good stuff man
but even better that you’re a man u fan!!! lol
AllAlone ♥ wrote:
liverpool - gerrard man hmmmmm sme sxc stuff there :) lol … liverpool all the way
ha ha i like peppe reina something about that bald head lol
AllAlone ♥ wrote:
stuck wrote:
AllAlone ♥ wrote:
liverpool - gerrard man hmmmmm sme sxc stuff there :) lol … liverpool all the wayha ha i like peppe reina something about that bald head lol
Lol noo gerrard hes some sexy thing … or crouch for his intelligence hmmm
Haha u gotta go for the bald head and the intelligence lol
Well i’m not a liverpool fan but gerrard dominates, much better then lampard. That was random but they were talking about who should play for england and who should get dropped.
♥ sarah wrote:
velvettundr wrote:
AllAlone ♥ wrote:
stuck wrote:
AllAlone ♥ wrote:
liverpool - gerrard man hmmmmm sme sxc stuff there :) lol … liverpool all the wayha ha i like peppe reina something about that bald head lol
Lol noo gerrard hes some sexy thing … or crouch for his intelligence hmmm
Haha u gotta go for the bald head and the intelligence lol
Well i’m not a liverpool fan but gerrard dominates, much better then lampard. That was random but they were talking about who should play for england and who should get dropped.
GERRARD :)
im all for gerrard i know im a liverpool fan but i have never really thought much ov Lampard he is no where near as good as gerrard. Gerrard and Barry in central midfeild for england!!
stuck wrote:
♥ sarah wrote:
velvettundr wrote:
AllAlone ♥ wrote:
stuck wrote:
AllAlone ♥ wrote:
liverpool - gerrard man hmmmmm sme sxc stuff there :) lol … liverpool all the wayha ha i like peppe reina something about that bald head lol
Lol noo gerrard hes some sexy thing … or crouch for his intelligence hmmm
Haha u gotta go for the bald head and the intelligence lol
Well i’m not a liverpool fan but gerrard dominates, much better then lampard. That was random but they were talking about who should play for england and who should get dropped.
GERRARD :)
im all for gerrard i know im a liverpool fan but i have never really thought much ov Lampard he is no where near as good as gerrard. Gerrard and Barry in central midfeild for england!!
Ha this isnt my man u bias opinion but it should definitely be gerrard, hagreeves in center midfield. When he gets back to full fitness it would be a dominating combo. Hagreeves has the energy and aggresive style to be a solid defensive mid which is what england need i think. Lampard and gerrard both want to go up so keep gerrard let him go up when he wants and have hagreeves keep things in the attacking half
thats y is should be barry. plus when liverpool buy barry i rekon over crimbo they will be playing with each other week in and week out
wait y should it be berry? Because of hagreeves fitness? O and i see now but i doubt berry will be playing along side gerrard week in and week out. What about alonso?
it saddens me to say this as alonso is a fantastic player but i think he will get sold next summer
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