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There vioces sharp against all other nioses of the waking day

A feather falls gently to the ground
lying softly on the green duey grass
waiting for an unknowing child to come

The soft glow of light hiting there backs
The world awaking at there shrill tones

But one with a sweet vioce hovers gently on
Until the day is set
Until light is back
Day is bright
And people know that there is life

A music so soft and sweet the changing rytmes
Shrill and soft

If there is danger
It is not shown
Or meerly masked
Beneath the gentle wings

These creatures come every time
The world begins again

Signs are left of gods creation
An unsuspecting child
Will find them
One bye One

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PollyinLove offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (3 minutes after post)

That is good poetry :) I am not usually to keen on poems based on nature but I did like it :)

I am posting the poem I just wrote although it won’t make too much sense to anyone other than the person it’s for and I know it’s s**t :) lol.

You get me through the day,
But often make me cry all night.
I long to talk with you whenever you’re gone,
But when you’re here I know not what to say.
I read your writing daily and scan your page for your feelings,
But the minute something changed I was cut up.
know you arn’t mine,But please don’t be someone elses.
I shouldn’t ask you that, I don’t have the right,
But now all I want from you is a smile.
I never stop worrying and i’m constantly crying,
But when you ask me to stop I want to but it just got harder.
I have been lost for words,But have had the chances to show you.
I am more broken than ever and these words they arn’t flowing,
But I am risking my life to express how I feel.

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Katiebug637 offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (5 minutes after post)

oh my…i cant write a poem for the life of me!

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PollyinLove offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (7 minutes after post)

MUFC 4 LYF (franky) wrote:
? who is it for?
:P may i ask

Yes or course :) It’s for my friend James who I am on love with…http://help.com/post/199717-james-i-fell-for-him-and-i-don82

That’s a post about him on the off chance that you are interested….

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Katiebug637 offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (7 minutes after post)

Makes complete sense

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PollyinLove offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (9 minutes after post)

MUFC 4 LYF (franky) wrote:
ok. :Pjames is a lcuky guy anyway lol

MUFC 4 LYF (franky) wrote:
I like to write…i dont know why…but i just…doits like…taking my emotions out…i dont like to talk much really…but i love to write…about emotions…:P i dont know if that makes sense.. =/

Not really…..I am rather obsessive…lol…Oh and by the wya he loves me too :D

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PollyinLove offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (11 minutes after post)

MUFC 4 LYF (franky) wrote:
:Di wouldnt mind if someone was obsessive with me… =/

I bet someone is :)

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Dark Death Of The So offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 6 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (1 hour, 44 minutes after post)

hi r u still here??

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angel♥ offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 13 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (4 hours, 42 minutes after post)

:O :O
you never told me you could write poetry!!!!!!!!! :O

that was soo good! :D

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stuck offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (8 hours, 58 minutes after post)

that was not bad to say ur a man u fan lol

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velvettundr offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (3 days, 11 hours after post)

That’s some good stuff man
but even better that you’re a man u fan!!! lol

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stuck offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (4 days, 1 hour after post)

eww liverpool and hull city all the way

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (4 days, 6 hours after post)

AllAlone ♥ wrote:
liverpool - gerrard man hmmmmm sme sxc stuff there :) lol … liverpool all the way

ha ha i like peppe reina something about that bald head lol

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (4 days, 8 hours after post)

AllAlone ♥ wrote:

stuck wrote:
AllAlone ♥ wrote:
liverpool - gerrard man hmmmmm sme sxc stuff there :) lol … liverpool all the way

ha ha i like peppe reina something about that bald head lol

Lol noo gerrard hes some sexy thing … or crouch for his intelligence hmmm

Haha u gotta go for the bald head and the intelligence lol

Well i’m not a liverpool fan but gerrard dominates, much better then lampard. That was random but they were talking about who should play for england and who should get dropped.

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stuck offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (5 days, 3 hours after post)

♥ sarah wrote:

velvettundr wrote:
AllAlone ♥ wrote:
stuck wrote:
AllAlone ♥ wrote:
liverpool - gerrard man hmmmmm sme sxc stuff there :) lol … liverpool all the way

ha ha i like peppe reina something about that bald head lol

Lol noo gerrard hes some sexy thing … or crouch for his intelligence hmmm

Haha u gotta go for the bald head and the intelligence lol

Well i’m not a liverpool fan but gerrard dominates, much better then lampard. That was random but they were talking about who should play for england and who should get dropped.

GERRARD :)

im all for gerrard i know im a liverpool fan but i have never really thought much ov Lampard he is no where near as good as gerrard. Gerrard and Barry in central midfeild for england!!

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (5 days, 5 hours after post)

stuck wrote:

♥ sarah wrote:
velvettundr wrote:
AllAlone ♥ wrote:
stuck wrote:
AllAlone ♥ wrote:
liverpool - gerrard man hmmmmm sme sxc stuff there :) lol … liverpool all the way

ha ha i like peppe reina something about that bald head lol

Lol noo gerrard hes some sexy thing … or crouch for his intelligence hmmm

Haha u gotta go for the bald head and the intelligence lol

Well i’m not a liverpool fan but gerrard dominates, much better then lampard. That was random but they were talking about who should play for england and who should get dropped.

GERRARD :)

im all for gerrard i know im a liverpool fan but i have never really thought much ov Lampard he is no where near as good as gerrard. Gerrard and Barry in central midfeild for england!!

Ha this isnt my man u bias opinion but it should definitely be gerrard, hagreeves in center midfield. When he gets back to full fitness it would be a dominating combo. Hagreeves has the energy and aggresive style to be a solid defensive mid which is what england need i think. Lampard and gerrard both want to go up so keep gerrard let him go up when he wants and have hagreeves keep things in the attacking half

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stuck offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (5 days, 7 hours after post)

thats y is should be barry. plus when liverpool buy barry i rekon over crimbo they will be playing with each other week in and week out

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (5 days, 9 hours after post)

wait y should it be berry? Because of hagreeves fitness? O and i see now but i doubt berry will be playing along side gerrard week in and week out. What about alonso?

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stuck offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (1 week after post)

it saddens me to say this as alonso is a fantastic player but i think he will get sold next summer

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stuck offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (1 week after post)

o and he will be u wait crimbo!!!

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velvettundr offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (1 week, 1 day after post)

Crimbo? Is that an insult?

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stuck offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (1 week, 2 days after post)

no it means christmas

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (1 week, 2 days after post)

o ok i c lol

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