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Anybody, please proofread my cover letter:

I read your advertisement for an Administrative Assistant with great interest and enthusiasm, as my skills and qualifications match your requirements for this position. Therefore, I am submitting my résumé for your review and consideration. Please allow me to explain briefly the contribution I would make with your organization.
Through out my career, both educational and professional, I gained much experience and skills needed for this type of job. I enjoy working with people from different backgrounds and always display a positive and cooperative attitude. I am a highly organized person with a good eye for details because I believe that an organized work ethic is the key to better productivity. I work well under pressure and have the ability to manage multiple assignments in a professional manner.
In addition, my computer expertises are beyond average. I have a deep knowledge of all MS Office programs (Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Outlook and Access) as well as other computer applications. Also I have the ability to solve common computer malfunctions, both software and hardware related.
Again, my résumé will detail the required skills and background you seek. I would welcome the opportunity for an interview at your convenience, and I thank you in advance for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,

thank you in advance

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closed offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 53 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (14 minutes after post)

Looks good. I would however, change it to “computer expertise” and not “expertises”

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (19 minutes after post)

To the Hiring Manger:

I am submitting my name and qualifications for consideration for the Administrative Assistant position recently advertised in [publication name]. I am interested in bringing my skills in office productivity, project and time management, and interpersonal relations to your firm.

Throughout my career, both in both educational and professional settings, I have gained the experience needed for this position. I am a highly organized person with a good eye for details. I believe that an organized work ethic is the key to better productivity. I work well under pressure and have the ability to manage multiple assignments in a professional manner.

In addition, my computer expertise includes extensive knowledge of all MS Office programs (Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Outlook and Access) as well as other applications. I am also comfortable with solving common computer malfunctions, both software and hardware related.

My résumé is attached and my references are available upon request. I would welcome the opportunity for an interview at our mutual convenience, and I thank you in advance for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,

etc

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (21 minutes after post)

thank you very much cailean and john

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (39 minutes after post)

thank you everyone

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Gävle, 03, SE | 1 year, 1 month ago (7 hours, 7 minutes after post)

I’ll book this one, will read it later

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