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Devil_on_Earth
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“Shadow”

Following me
Stalking me
Same posture
Same tone
In the light
Where ever I go
Moon shines
The figure fades
Haunting me only in day

Just a short little poem that I am thinking of extending and turning into another song…
please post comments!
thanks

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~Shie~ offline Verified User (2 years, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 11 #
Gloversville, NY, US | 1 year, 1 month ago (1 minute after post)

very nice… thanks for sharing..

so much talent… wow.. impressive

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littlenick offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 131 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (7 minutes after post)

Sweet. Nice. Short. Give me more!

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Teddybear offline Verified User (1 year, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
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It’s teases. I like.

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blackrose offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 38 #
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oooh 0.0 i really like this one.

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