Love help: Eleven - Help.com

Eleven

Promises broken
Which love could not hold
Words that were spoken
Which love could not fold

A time in the land
So deep in my heart
The thought of your hand
And what tore us apart

And those graceful words
Which trapped my soul
And let out free birds
That made me so whole

A will of a fire
A burn of our passion
The deeply desire
Love’s greatest fashion

Seemingly strong
We were forever
It didn’t last long
Now I must remember

A child we’d bear
From love’s creation
And a life we’d care
From our dedication

A promise to last
A life with my dear
Eleven months had passed
Not even a year

We couldn’t last a life
We couldn’t last a year
You can’t be my wife
That’s my biggest fear

All of lost hope
And all of pure fate
Slowly cutting the rope
My ex-soul-mate

Why does it burn
After these times
Why did we turn
A love full of rhymes

Month of eleven
We lasted together
Months that were heaven
Months not forever

This poem’s not sad
It’s not of regret
It’s of what we had
And not to forget

I’ll miss you saying
You love me so
I’ll miss you praying
For your hero

Just look out each dawn
And don’t shed a tear
Don’t ask why I’m gone
I’ll always be here

Now I am a friend
So we can still see
Our hearts start to mend
As we are set free

But now there’s a song
I can never hear again
If I do to long
I feel the pain
Of the empty space
Where you once were
And your pretty face
That it referred

Thank you for
Touching my heart
And the love we pour
For being that part

I’ll never forget
What you did bring
Or ever forget
When you would sing

There’s a lot I will miss
Like seeing you smile
And having that kiss
That brightens my mile

Holding your hand
And feeling your arms
Your beauty so grand
And protecting from harms

So here’s to goodbye
But I won’t say forever
Just don’t make him cry
The next man you’re together

Marco A. Sama
Saturday October 4th 2008

This open post was written 3 months, 1 week ago | V/U/S: 108, 8, 9 | Edit Post | Leave a reply | Report Post


Reciprocity (0) Reciprocation Failure -- The poster has NOT helped anyone else yet!

Since writing this post Kalorok may have helped people, but has not within the last 4 days. Kalorok is a verified member, has been around for 10 months, 3 weeks and has 7 posts and 329 replies to their name.

Post Tags (12)

Replies (8)

Where were you?

Click and drag to move the map around. FAQ: How we place people on this map »
You can also watch events on Help.com as they happen
Mouse over the map for 2 seconds to see an expanded, interactive view

georgey.t offline Verified User (5 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 46 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (28 minutes after post)

thats a good poem did u write it

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Help me with: ~ Closed ~
This reply has been removed.
andromeda offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
Padang, 24, ID | 3 months, 1 week ago (1 hour, 29 minutes after post)

deep

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
blackrose offline Verified User (3 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 38 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months ago (2 hours, 44 minutes after post)

this was lovely.

andromeda wrote:
deep

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Dylanlegio offline Verified User (5 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (1 week, 3 days after post)

amazing.. simply amazing.

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
UniqueLikeEveryone offline Verified User (2 months, 3 weeks) Shouts: 5 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (1 week, 4 days after post)

Wonderful poem……I tried to write something once, but it didn’t come even CLOSE to this…

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Anonymous #
1 month, 2 weeks ago (1 month, 2 weeks after post)

really deep.. nice poem.

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Anonymous #
1 month, 2 weeks ago (1 month, 2 weeks after post)

its soft definitely reminder and not a regret. has she read it are you still in love with her. make sure she know because it will help close a whole in your heart if you are still in love with her. still its great that you are letting her go

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators

Invite Others to Help

A logged in and verified Help.com member has the ability to setup a Friends List and invite others to help with posts.