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Help with Poetry Homework.
Hi everyone,
I need help with my poetry homework. I have to present a poem into class that is supose to be really creative and “poetic”. Can someone peer edit, critique, or any feedbacks to change it because I’m reallly nervous to present this and this is a really important grade.
The Storm:
Grab what you can while there’s time
The cool current is moving faster with the wind
There’s a never-ending storm in the distance
It rumbles it’s symphony for its next cadence
We ran across the side as the houses fly
Our hair breezes like palm trees in the eye
My heartbeat syncs with the flashes in the sky
The water is on it’s way as i turn away and cry
For the next moment all I see is a white glare
My eyes opened and I saw the calm blue ocean
Underneath my warm covers away from all fear
I was glad that the storm had disappeared
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