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Sorry that was pretty bad. No offense.

EDIUWE wrote:
BOOOOOOOOO U SUC DIC!!!!!!

I sense a possibility that you are the anonymous poster of this poem- if that’s not the case, then you are being uncritically cruel!

its not that bad really.
a good basis for better work.

and EDIUWE…i think we all know who REALLY sucks “dic”
grow up!

=)

Hmmm, EDIUWE, I get your point but I don’t rate your choice of insult!

Suc ing dic can be great!

is it a haiku?

Yes, thank you for noticing.

i think people who aren’t into poetry will not get it, not realize its a haiku, and will not think highly of it

Probably true. I wrote it about 10 years ago, and evidently it struck enough of a chord with me for me to remember it all this time…

Anonymous wrote:
i think people who aren’t into poetry will not get it, not realize its a haiku, and will not think highly of it

*raises hand* I got it, but I just think it could be a whole lot better. Idk, just my preference. Doesn’t mean anything in the grand scheme of things. Didn’t know it was a haiku though.

Anonymous wrote:
Yes, thank you for noticing.

Hmm, it isn’t the traditional 5-7-5 haiku, but it does have the natural symbolism and good imagery for what it is.

Well I do know poetry, but I am not that into Haiku’s. I think it is an excess use of structure. and it isn’t a 5-7-5 haiku

ow… right

lucif wrote:
ow… right

I hate when that happens- sorry ^_^

ok, fair points all.

Thanks for the feedback, off to bed now x

Anonymous wrote:
ok, fair points all.

Thanks for the feedback, off to bed now x

Rest well, dream well!

You can’t just objectively “rate” art. Art is very subjective.

stuck in mud wrote:
You can’t just objectively “rate” art. Art is very subjective.

I suppose you are right, but there isn’t anything that I in particular do not try to rate objectively first- mostly a precautionary measure.

Well you can rate some things.
technique, originality, use of constructions. etc. It is called criticism.