Wow!!! Dark but very spellbinding words :)
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You are really really good.Have you ever read anything from EDGAR ALLAN POE, the writer that so many horror movies were based on ?
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1 year, 1 month ago (7 minutes after post)
As I suspected, no one responds. Thank you though for responding.
seas light wrote:
You are really really good.Have you ever read anything from EDGAR ALLAN POE, the writer that so many horror movies were based on ?
Yes, definetly.
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1 year, 1 month ago (9 minutes after post)
The tell tale heart is simply amazing. So many questions left unanswered in all his poems.
These will keep you up all night. Scary and mezmerizing stuff!!!
I love darker things. Writing dark poetry is easy for me.
Well… as long as I am no longer anon… might as well invite some people.
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Hello fall , great writing keep it up, dark but very intense :-) You look like another poster on here ? lol
Interesting. Brief but not bad at all :)
That was great! I liked the end =)!
Have you got any more poetry fall ?
Sasha101 wrote:
Hello fall , great writing keep it up, dark but very intense :-) You look like another poster on here ? lol
I am another poster on here: So cold/queen platypus… remember?
Yeah I know, thats why I said you look familiar lol :P
Your making a habit of revealing who you are lol, try clicking the anon button “before” you type the replies, that way you don’t forget lol
It’s very good. (And I do the same thing, forgetting to post anon. I also shout myself…lol)
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Death. The knife was stabbed into my chest, but I felt nothing. I said, “No, not deep enough.” He nodded his head and shoved deeper until the blade was right outside my heart. “Still not deep enough,” I told him. He nodded again and pushed further until it was through my heart. “Deeper” I commanded. With one last shove, I finally felt it. Death then looked me in the eyes and said “That is as far as I can go, I have finally reached your soul”.
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Death. The knife was stabbed into my chest, but I felt nothing. I said, “No, not deep enough.” He nodded his head and shoved deeper until the blade was right outside my heart. “Still not deep enough,” I told him. He nodded again and pushed further until it was through my heart. “Deeper” I commanded. With one last shove, I finally felt it. Death then looked me in the eyes and said “That is as far as I can go, I have finally reached your soul”.
This is a post I did anonymously and I wanted to post it as me.
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Death.
The knife was stabbed into my chest, but I felt nothing. “No.” I said, “Not deep enough.” He nodded his head and shoved deeper until the blade was right outside my heart. “Still not deep enough,” I told him. He nodded again and pushed further until my heart was pierced. “Deeper” I commanded. With one last shove, I finally felt it. He looked me in the eyes. “That is as far as I can go.” said death, “I have finally reached your soul”.
I posted this poem anonymously before… but I wanted to post it as myself now.
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Spectacular. Very nice work. Imagery bounds through my mind.
Thank you. btw… I’d be careful about your age. If you’re yonger than 13, don’t say it!
Very nice, appeals very nicely to my current mood…
Golden Chickens wrote:
Very nice, appeals very nicely to my current mood…
I’m sorry. Are you alright? Do you want to say anything?
Cassie_Me wrote:
Thank you. btw… I’d be careful about your age. If you’re yonger than 13, don’t say it!
Im 16 and yes i look young for my age!! :)
Uh… but I your post says you’re in 7th or 8th grade… or are you lying?
Oops… didn’t mean to say I in that.
Golden Chickens wrote:
Me?
I’m asking you if you’re okay. I was asking punklover about their age.
Ah, i’m fine, my mood changes like fire… Very calming, fire is…
Cassie_Me wrote:
Uh… but I your post says you’re in 7th or 8th grade… or are you lying?
Fine im 14 and 1/2 but i really dont think the half count so yeah im 14
You’re suspiciously old for your grade… hmmmm…. but okay, we’ll leave it at that.
Dont lie about your age. It is against the TOS. Just so you know :D
Good thing i haven’t lied… About, anything…
Cassie_Me wrote:
You’re suspiciously old for your grade… hmmmm…. but okay, we’ll leave it at that.
I got held back i have dislaxay I hope that how u spell it umm i swich my letter number and sometime i have some diffucaltis in spelling as u can see
We trust you chickens. You could lie and no one would be the wiser.:D
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Cassie_Me wrote:
You’re suspiciously old for your grade… hmmmm…. but okay, we’ll leave it at that.
I got held back i have dislaxay I hope that how u spell it umm i swich my letter number and sometime i have some diffucaltis in spelling as u can see
I have dyslexia too!! =D
It’s terrible that they held you back for it! My mom’s a dyslexia teacher, you should have gotten acomidations.
Well, gots to go now.. and i’m not lying.. lol =P see yas…
See ya chickens. Keep safe.
Cassie_Me wrote:
Punklover wrote:
Cassie_Me wrote:
You’re suspiciously old for your grade… hmmmm…. but okay, we’ll leave it at that.
I got held back i have dislaxay I hope that how u spell it umm i swich my letter number and sometime i have some diffucaltis in spelling as u can see
I have dyslexia too!! =D
yeah it was i got acomidations but not until last year i had to get tested and if i didn’t they would give the help i need
Creepy, Cassie ;) It’s a nice peace of poetic prose.
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