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I need a title for this poem for English class.

The style is called a 3 Stanza poem, where we write the first stanza about an object we see, the second about a person close to us, and the third about ourself. Then we have to think of a title to tie the three together. And thats where sweet, dear help.com comes in. And if you have any other suggestions about it, go ahead.
So here’s the poem:

Tall, slender, and white
The candle burning bright
And showing off it’s light
Impressioning my sight

You’re loving, dear, and sweet
So I’m staring at my feet
Try to calm my heartbeat
But feeling my face heat

Letting my eyes blink,
Watching my mind think,
Seeing my head sink,
Looking in the mirror.

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MaggieRae17 offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (5 minutes after post)

Pressure or impression perhaps?

kmichelle offline Verified User (1 year, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 6 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (6 minutes after post)

Impression. I like it!!
Thanks!! ♥

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absremixe offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (7 minutes after post)

nice poem, does the title have to be more than one word?

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kmichelle offline Verified User (1 year, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 6 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (7 minutes after post)

It can be as many words as I want. =)

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (8 minutes after post)

thanks. =)

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MaggieRae17 offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (8 minutes after post)

OO! How about perception?
Since aren’t all the poems about how YOU view things?

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (9 minutes after post)

MaggieRae17 wrote:
OO! How about perception? Since aren’t all the poems about how YOU view things?

“Waxed Perception?” Since you are also using a naturally cryptic medium to describe with.

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (10 minutes after post)

That works well!

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (11 minutes after post)

I’m a poet myself and I always leave the title for last. It’s good to be simple but unique. I personally would go with “My View”. Your describing things you see and also yourself.

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kmichelle offline Verified User (1 year, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 6 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (15 minutes after post)

Perception.. I like that too. =D
The Waxed part wouldn’t fit with the second stanza, though, would it?

I want something a bit more.. complex might be the word? than My View, because I want to distinguish myself from all the other poems being turned in tomorrow. You know?

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (16 minutes after post)

yeah i get ya..use a thessaurus helps me.

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (16 minutes after post)

absremixe wrote:
I’m a poet myself and I always leave the title for last. It’s good to be simple but unique. I personally would go with “My View”. Your describing things you see and also yourself.

Oo, and with the same idea as before you could call it “Plane View”, which captures the cryptic medium because it is distant and all encompassing like the view from a plane and it is a POW for “plain” as in your “regular” sight which is all you really had at your disposal in the first place.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (20 minutes after post)

Plane View is good too!! thanks you guys for all the help!! ♥

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (24 minutes after post)

I owe my interpretations to the words of Maggie and abs (thanks mates). And glad to add my take ^^

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (15 hours, 37 minutes after post)

You choose: “The Candle,” or “Looking in the Mirror,” or “Mirror.”

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (1 week, 3 days after post)

I think the poem should be called, “You, yourself and me”. I’m not sure if it’s a good title but that’s the best I can do.
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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (2 weeks, 1 day after post)

I added you as a friend. =)

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (3 weeks, 1 day after post)

Reflection can be a good title for your poem. Can I suggest? Pls change the last line…..it doesn’t fit….

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An Unknown Location | 7 months, 1 week ago (10 months after post)

Maybe…
Illumination?
Because you are revealing things about your subjects and candles dispell shadows with their light.
I’m not sure how good that was.
Great poem though. Good luck!

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An Unknown Location | 7 months, 1 week ago (10 months after post)

ME

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An Unknown Location | 7 months ago (10 months, 1 week after post)

how about My Perspective

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