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Hey wrote a poem leave your feedback!

I lost my friend the other day
One that I will miss terribly I must say
For one whole year I got through
Depending on no one but you
When things would get too hard to bear
I wouldn’t have to worry because you were always there
I would reach for you and hold you tight
And once I was done I knew everything was alright
But even though I love you so
I know that I must let you go
You show me that I am still alive
Without you I would have never survived
You make me calm when I have no control
But slowly I admit I am falling in a black hole
And though I love you
I despise you too
You made me someone I never knew
You’re a selfish thing I have to say
Because you make me feel happy so that I stay
But afterwards I drown in guilt
Until the pressure is built
And I go to you once more
And soon I will have nothing more to live for
You stupid knife you stupid pain
Why are you so vain?
Why do I have to leave with this terrible fight?
Of craving my own blood every single night
I beg of you my wonderful knife
Just give me back my life

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cherry_blossom 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (9 minutes after post)

oh my!! It was wonderful! Beautifully and creatively written! I’m speechless…lol! But seriously, it was amazing. Do you write often?? =]

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the lost girl 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (11 minutes after post)

wow that was good keep it up

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1 year, 1 month ago (11 minutes after post)

haha wow thank you!! um i dont as much anymore this poem i wrote when i started to stop cutting it was probably the hardest time ever in my life so my best work is created when im extremely distraught. ive been much happier recently so no inspirations but i used to write a lot.

cherry_blossom 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (16 minutes after post)

Well that’s cool. Yeah, I get what you’re saying. I get majorly inspired when I get in those crappy moods or whatever. It’s amazing what all you can come up with. I’m amazed with myself all the time after writing. I think to myself, “How in the heck did I ever think of that?” lol!

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Anonymous #
1 year, 1 month ago (17 minutes after post)

i know writing is so unique and powerful its wondeful what some people can come up with.

last_breath 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (1 hour, 13 minutes after post)

“And though I love you
I despise you too
You made me someone I never knew”

I can relate to this all too well…
Hugs to you…
I am sorry for your loss…
If you ever need anyting…
I am here for you…
~Alicia~

“We are all angels with but one wing,
And only by embracing each other can we fly”
-Luciano de Crescenzo

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Anonymous #
1 year, 1 month ago (2 hours, 7 minutes after post)

I’m not sure but I think I’ve seen this (or something very similar) somewhere else.

Anonymous #
1 year, 1 month ago (8 hours, 22 minutes after post)

oh well i swear on my life i wrote this. maybe another poem is similar but i swear i wasnt aware or have seen such a poem.

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An Unknown Location | 2 months ago (11 months, 3 weeks after post)

Very Good job.Its really a good looking and i am very impressed. I am also interested in a href=”http://www.poetries.co.cc/”>urdu poetry /a> which is in my mother language. Anyway, Keep it Up……

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