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skyy 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (2 minutes after post)

I liked it. Sad but deep and i know a lot of women go through this. I just hope it never happens to me

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (5 minutes after post)

It kind of sinks the heart a little bit, but that is because it’s good.

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evansent 2008 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (7 minutes after post)

thanks,i know its something ive never experienced myself
i have seen it first hand tho.
this is the poem i sent of to baltimore
it got published in a anthology called best poems of the 90s

skyy wrote:
I liked it. Sad but deep and i know a lot of women go through this. I just hope it never happens to me

skyy 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (18 minutes after post)

Well i havent experienced it first hand but my family is known for being in abusive relationships. My grandfather and father were abusive so im scared that i might fall into that pattern and get an abusive husband/boyfriend. It stops me from dating… I think they will be all mushy and loving in the beginning then switch on me for the worse. Basically what you said in your poem

But i see why it was picked as one of the best

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (20 minutes after post)

Very sad poem, but well written.

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evansent 2008 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (20 minutes after post)

skyy wrote:
Well i havent experienced it first hand but my family is known for being in abusive relationships. My grandfather and father were abusive so im scared that i might fall into that pattern and get an abusive husband/boyfriend. It stops me from dating… I think they will be all mushy and loving in the beginning then switch on me for the worse. Basically what you said in your poem

But i see why it was picked as one of the best

thankyou,
i hope some good comes out of it,thats why i wrote it :)

Marylou 2 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (2 hours, 28 minutes after post)

It is very good indeed, Evansent. Very well writen. I like it a lot.
A gesture of love from your heart to so many women out there.
I hope many of them get to read it.

Thank you.

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evansent 2008 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (2 hours, 30 minutes after post)

Marylou wrote:
It is very good indeed, Evansent. Very well writen. I like it a lot.
A gesture of love from your heart to so many women out there.
I hope many of them get to read it.

Thank you.

thankyou marylou :)

☆lilies☆ 295 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (16 hours, 12 minutes after post)

I feel sad reading it but the language is very realistic. Well done! :)

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evansent 2008 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (16 hours, 16 minutes after post)

*lilies wrote:
I feel sad reading it but the language is very realistic. Well done! :)

thnks,i missed some out tho
it should say
tears,anger web of lies!!!
lies,lies,lies,its nothing i respect
its not you walking around with this defect etc

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evansent 2008 edited this post 1 year, 1 month ago. Read the previous text »

you say you hurt me because you love me so much
how can hurt replace that loving touch
bruised face,cracked ribs,tears coming from my eyes
i cant help thinking why you telling me all these lies
you say drink does this to you,it triggers of your rage
you wasnt like this tho when we got engaged
band of gold on my finger,everything start there
the battering,the punching!you think your being fair
go on do it,go on be a big man
go on do it! go on see if you can
then see the hate&disgust in my red eyes
tears,anger,web of lies!!!
its not you who says oh i fell into the door
then people stare as if i ask for more
more shame more punishment more embarrasment to bare
you replace your love with your fists
but why should you care

this is a little poem i wrote its called behind closed doors,hope you all like it .

evansent 2008 edited this post 1 year, 1 month ago. Read the previous text »

how can hurt replace that loving touch
bruised face,cracked ribs,tears coming from my eyes
i cant help thinking why you telling me all these lies
you say drink does this to you,it triggers of your rage
you wasnt like this tho when we got engaged
band of gold on my finger,everything start there
the battering,the punching!you think your being fair
go on do it,go on be a big man
go on do it! go on see if you can
then see the hate&disgust in my red eyes
tears,anger,web of lies!!!
its not you who says oh i fell into the door
then people stare as if i ask for more
more shame more punishment more embarrasment to bare
you replace your love with your fists
but why should you care

this is a little poem i wrote its called behind closed doors,hope you all like it .

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