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My first poem in YEARS!

My daughter is going on her first trip. She will be turning 10 during her first excursion away with her school. I wanted to do something special for her so I pulled out my scrapbooking gear and made a beautiful card, now what to write? I havnt written a poem since I was 14 myself, so its a round of firsts this week, my daughters first excursion, first birthday without her parents, not to mention its the big ‘double digit’ birthday and my first poem…anyway I wanted to share it with my friends here before I hand it too the teacher to give to her on her Birthday (hope teacher doesnt mark it, lol)

Its a big 10th Birthday this year
And on your special day
You spread your little wings
And fly beyond the rain

As i watch you grow with pride
From deep down inside
Your beauty strikes my eye
Dear daughter let it shine

Thanx for letting me share :)

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seas light offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (10 minutes after post)

That will be sure to warm, and touch your daughters heart. The best birthday gift she could ever hope for. Material things come and go, but that poem will give her a fuzzy glow lol… Very nice mom.. :D

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Victoria Sponge offline Verified User (2 years, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 5 #
Fritwell, K2, GB | 1 year, 1 month ago (21 minutes after post)

Oh that is so sweet, I love it. Can you be my mum too?? HeHeh

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (8 hours, 53 minutes after post)

LOL, thank guys, makes me feel really good :)

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (9 hours, 41 minutes after post)

Awww, that’s so sweet.
She’ll love it!

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (13 hours, 40 minutes after post)

Awww, I like it! :)

Lets just hope it doesent rain though hehe. I dont remember anything from my 10th birthday all those years ago so with this and everything else going on it seems like this will be something she will remember.

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (15 hours, 52 minutes after post)

Nicely done Morgan. I’m sure she’ll love it.

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