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I asked my girl to dance and awaited her reaction. All the people dancing around us, for me it was to much distraction. We started dancing then i saw amongst the crowd a familiar face. It was an old friend i knew from an old time and place. As i danced with my girl rite in my arms, i felt like a fool with sweaty palm. Cuz my girl is dancing rite in front of me, but i can’t help but watch the girl dancing in the back unsteadily. I some times wished that she was mine but, i knew that she wouldn’t give me the time of day. And so i just kept watching her, from my eyes she did not stray. I kept on dancing with my girl up on the dance floor. We danced the night away far after the girl had left. And in the end i knew i made my choice, i’m happy and enjoying my life.
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Untitled poem.
All the people dancing around us, for me it was to much distraction. I asked my girl to dance and awaited her reaction. We started dancing then i saw amongst the crowd a familiar face. It was an old friend i knew from an old time and place. As i danced with my girl rite in my arms, i felt like a fool with sweaty palm. Cuz my girl is dancing rite in front of me, but i can’t help but watch the girl dancing in the back unsteadily. I some times wished that she was mine but, i knew that she wouldn’t give me the time of day. And so i just kept watching her, from my eyes she did not stray. I kept on dancing with my girl up on the dance floor. We danced the night away far after the girl had left. And in the end i knew i made my choice, i’m happy and enjoying my life.
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