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Hey to all those people who love to write!

I just started a journalism class this year, and I’m a little stuck. I’m writing an article on “Students Behind the Scenes” it’s about students who have a little something unique about them, like a jock who likes to bake, or the smart girl having webbed toes…I just can’t figure out what to write for my summary lead…can someone please pretend they are me writing this article for just a couple of minutes and give me some ideas for my lead? That would be great!

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (7 minutes after post)

Well, in a summary lead, you need to answer the 5 questions. You know the answers to them, so put them together in a news report style sentence.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (12 minutes after post)

Yeah, same here. I’m just not sure how to form that into a lead.

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ktmos 0 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (13 minutes after post)

hmmm students behind the scenes?
a student is rarely the same person “on stage” as they are behind the scenes.
the jock being a good cook was a funny idea but if you want to go serious you coulld write about the health studies student with a drug addiction or i know plenty of people that are studying spports and fitness that are addicted to steroids… i could go on but its your article… hope i helped in some way:)

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (14 minutes after post)

try reading here:

http://newswriting.wordpress.com/2008…

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (17 minutes after post)

Ok, thanks ktmos, in some way you did help. But also I’m trying to find something unique about a few people and then put that into an article. And believe me, I would love to do something on health studies, but this was something assingned to a 10 grade elective class. lol

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ktmos 0 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (20 minutes after post)

no prob! dont really know what a 10 grade elective class is but anyways good luck with your work! Slán!

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aeolian mode 10 #
Rocklin, CA, US | 1 year, 1 month ago (21 minutes after post)

Write about something sooo controversical it makes people heads spin…..Find an idea that is seldom addressed and create a stir, which is what I do on help.com Keep away from in the box ie. safe topics and go for it.. The pen is mightier then the sword… The spoken word can create love and war…. Think outside the box…..

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (23 minutes after post)

haha, sorry! 10th grade elevtive class (forogt to put the th after the 10) is a class we got to choose over many others to take for 10th grade.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (24 minutes after post)

*elective and *forgot…

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ktmos 0 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (28 minutes after post)

oh right ya! thats american classes in school ya? duh!
dumb moment for me there!
enjoy your writing! cool beans!

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (29 minutes after post)

haha! not a dumb moment, just…well yeah. A dumb moment. haha well, thank you very much and have a pleasant day!

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aeolian mode 10 #
Rocklin, CA, US | 1 year, 1 month ago (40 minutes after post)

write about a cutter who practices on oneself in and is just practicing for the real passion he/she has….keep the suspense up by focusing on the knife…..

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (45 minutes after post)

While interesting, i’m not quite sure how well that would go over…lol. I live in a smale town and go to an extremely small school, so it would be amazingly easy for rumors to fly. Also, we don’t exactly have cheerleaders…I know right? Depressing.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (7 hours, 52 minutes after post)

ask some people what their hidden talents are, or something no1 knows about them. Im sure you’ll come up with some great stuff, it will be more humerous than serious, but it will make for a fun article and it will keep the rest of the students guessing who it is… you could structure your lead around that, such as: we all know her smiling face, but we dont know that she can solve a rubiks cube behind her back. Dont mention names or even fake names, if you do use false names make sure to make a note of it, at either thebeginning or the end of your article so the readers will now… Sounds like a really fun project, hope I helped, Good Luck

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (13 hours, 40 minutes after post)

go round a school ect filming interviews and then at the end of the day use there quotes and thoughts to help bring up the poenm

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yellowducke10 edited this post 1 year, 1 month ago. Read the previous text »

Hey to all those people who love to write! I just started a Journalism class this year, and I’m a little stuck. I’m writing an article on “Students behind the Scenes” it’s about students who have a little something unique about them, like a jock who likes to bake, or the smart girl having webbed toes…I just can’t figure out what to write for my summary lead…can someone please pretend they are me writing this article for just a couple of minutes and give me some ideas for my lead? That would be great!

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