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Rain.

The tingling sensation wakes me, in both body and soul. The cool touch invigorates me. As I dance and spin, I look up into the sky and see a myriad of stars looking down on me, their light being more reasuring than any voice. Out of breath and soaking wet, I lay down on the cold, hard pavement. I rest my hand on my chest, feeling the up and down movement of oxygen finding it’s way into my lungs. Finally relaxed, a smile finds it’s way onto my lips, and with it, laughter fills me. The rain is my awakening.

Sorry it’s been so long since I’ve posted a poem… haven’t had time. Hope you enjoy! =D
Also… what do you think of the rain?

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southern_comfort 6 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (3 minutes after post)

Oh that’s a poem? I thought you were describing your dream about us….

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Winter Rose 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (4 minutes after post)

Nope… all these are poems. Only that one time was a vision. But I do often daydream about the rain.

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Winter Rose 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (4 minutes after post)

Amon wrote:
Beautiful.

Thank you Amon, I’m glad you read it.

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Rain. The tingling sensation wakes me, in both body and soul. The cool touch invigorates me. As I dance and spin, I look up into the sky and see a myriad of stars looking down on me, their light being more reasuring than any voice. Out of breath and soaking wet, I lay down on the cold, hard pavement. I rest my hand on my chest, feeling the up and down movement of oxygen finding it’s way into my lungs. Finally relaxed, a smile finds it’s way onto my lips, and with it, laughter fills me. The rain is my awakening.

Sorry it’s been so long since I’ve posted a poem… haven’t had time. Hope you enjoy! =D

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Winter Rose 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (8 minutes after post)

So, do you like the rain?

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southern_comfort 6 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (11 minutes after post)

I love the rain. I’d love to walking in the rain with you.

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southern_comfort 6 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (11 minutes after post)

to GO walking….

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (13 minutes after post)

Awesome poem Hannah. What I think of the rain…

The rain is the gentle cleansing of the earth. As the tears of the sky fall, the tension of the world is released. The air relaxes, the trees no longer strain and peace returns. This is when I can sleep.

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Winter Rose 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (15 minutes after post)

Bogdan wrote:
Awesome poem Hannah. What I think of the rain…

The rain is the gentle cleansing of the earth. As the tears of the sky fall, the tension of the world is released. The air relaxes, the trees no longer strain and peace returns. This is when I can sleep.

trying to one-up me on my own post? lol, jk bogdan. What I think exactly.

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Winter Rose 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (15 minutes after post)

southern_comfort wrote:
I love the rain. I’d love to walking in the rain with you.

sounds fun southern comfort! ;D I’ll brb… I have to go eat dinner.

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Bogdan (Gone) 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (16 minutes after post)

To be honest, I am usually very careful to not respond with any type of poetry. Once I did that on a different forum and got severely attacked by the original poster XD

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Leslie63 4 #
Weston, MA, US | 1 year, 1 month ago (34 minutes after post)

looooovvee the rain i like this poem too describes the rain nicely

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (38 minutes after post)

Thanks. I’m back by the way.

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Hellacious Haro 3 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (1 hour, 16 minutes after post)

A good poem :]

I love the rain.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (1 hour, 39 minutes after post)

Delicious Haro wrote:
A good poem :]

I love the rain.

thank you

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seas light 3 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (1 hour, 54 minutes after post)

Simply lovely! Rain is the soothing music that fills my soul… Thank you for this comforting read Cassie :D

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (1 hour, 58 minutes after post)

seas light wrote:
Simply lovely! Rain is the soothing music that fills my soul… Thank you for this comforting read Cassie :D

Your welcome

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Vilén 4 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (2 hours, 7 minutes after post)

Cool! A bit corny, but otherwise, I like it!

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (2 hours, 13 minutes after post)

Vilén wrote:
Cool! A bit corny, but otherwise, I like it!

excuse me? Well fine… =P

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (2 hours, 49 minutes after post)

Good stuff. Allot of imagery in that one. I felt like i was there

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (2 hours, 51 minutes after post)

Thank you.

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (12 hours, 1 minute after post)

Really great poem, I loved the part about the stars and then feeling that connection to the rain at the end. Thanks for sharing!

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (12 hours, 39 minutes after post)

Beautiful poem :)

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velvettundr wrote:
Good stuff. Allot of imagery in that one. I felt like i was there

I agree

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Winter Rose 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (1 day after post)

Thank you everyone, this poem really came from my heart. I love looking at the stars, and feeling the rain. The combination of the two is so relaxing and reasuring.

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