Blind
Wishing, hoping, waiting
But it feels like you’re just fading
I don’t know why
But sometimes I wanna cry.
I say I’m done trying
But I know I’m lying.
You make me smile
But just for a while.
I wish you could know what you do to me
and then you could finally see
you are special to me and only me
You seem to be blind
By something that’s on your mind
Is it me
or am I just someone you never notice or see?
newest poem i made!!!
tell me wht you think!
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WOW
is that a good or a bad wow?
seems like you threw in some rhyming couplets in at parts.
Very nice job. I usually write poems that don’t ryme though. It makes things easier to get your feeling out.
lol yea idk its just i like poems that rhyme so i tried to get my feelings out with rhymes and stuff
and it seemed to work so
yea
The marvel of man, adrift on the sea
but unlucky was she for the force of the waves
drove her into the cays
and there she dwells yet
stagnant decay, the fate of all men.
rhyming poems are fun…
lol i agree they r rlly fun
did u make that poem up?
it sounds rlly good
lol yea real mad skillz dude
haha
i wish there was some place i could put my poems so they could be put out there
tht would be rlly cool
RENTfan4LIFE wrote:
i wish there was some place i could put my poems so they could be put out theretht would be rlly cool
Several sites exist for you to do that, Google it.
haha chyeahh homie g!!
lmfaoo omg im sick of talking like this
im stopping
Commander Ikari wrote:
RENTfan4LIFE wrote:
i wish there was some place i could put my poems so they could be put out theretht would be rlly coolSeveral sites exist for you to do that, Google it.
where where??!?!?!?!
do u no anywhere specific!?!??!?
lol tht would make my day
Goldfish bowl for sale
cracks on the side, very well used
Small odor of dead fish
haiku.
lol
ill buy it!
how much?
RENTfan4LIFE wrote:
lol ill buy it! how much?
Got a quarter?
man tht reminded me of one time where i was at a carnival and i won a goldfish and it died cause it jumped out of the bowl
……
r.i.p goldie
RENTfan4LIFE wrote:
man tht reminded me of one time where i was at a carnival and i won a goldfish and it died cause it jumped out of the bowl……r.i.p goldie
jumped?
What a dare devil.
yea i had some pretty weird fish
one blew up
one committed suicide
and another one was eaten by a bigger fish
…i miss my fishies
RENTfan4LIFE wrote:
yea i had some pretty weird fishone blew upone committed suicideand another one was eaten by a bigger fish…i miss my fishies
Fish bowl of horrors.
lmfaooo
ok so it was the weirdest thing
so my fish tht committed suicide
i found him stuck in the filter
(hes still alive)
so i got him out with the little fish net thingy
and then i walk away and i come back and hes in there again
so i saved him again
so i was watchin him and i see him going towards it so im like ok whtevr
so i go away for a while and i come back and hes dead in the filter
=[
poor guy
Well… At least he’s in a better place…
or worse, most likely he’s in the sewer.
lol
pobably
poor pinky!
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