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I need help in writing a critique on an online article found at http://serendip.brynmawr.edu/exchange/node/1901.

I need to write a 3 page critique due in the next 7 hours but I don’t know how to start or what to do or anything someone please help me!

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*country girl* offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (50 minutes after post)

what kind of class is this for

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An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (55 minutes after post)

this is a for an education class of fundamentals and excellence , basically this is supposed to be showing our use of “critical thinking”

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (59 minutes after post)

im not really sure what you mean by that
are you talking about like an english class where you critique how it’s written -diction, syntex, allusion…or are you supposed to say whether or not it got the message across in an appealing way….or am i completely off here

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An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 34 minutes after post)

In a sense you’re right, but it has to do with more of whats my apporach to the subject did the author use adequate information did he or she state it properly is the information correct, how dated is her information stuff like that not grammar and all that but more I don’t kno 2 be honest.. this is what I have so far

The legalization of medical cannabis has been debated over many years yet there is still no agreement between both opposing parties. The author of the article I read talks widely about the pros and cons about legalizing medical cannabis. Her research done was adequate for the format and audience for which the article was being presented for. However, she did have some flaws as some of the information stated within the article was not backed up by facts rather it was just stated. The authors view on the subject is that there should be some sort of agreement so that there is a legal way of supplying patients with cannabis. I will be talking about her flaws, her strengths, and my overall opinion on her article.

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 42 minutes after post)

that sounds like a good start because you’ve got a lot you can expand on in new paragraphs
like
1. what about the way that it is formated makes it adequate
2.what were the flaws -and whether they were big flaws or just minor mistakes
3. what you liked about how she presented the info
4. what you didn’t like

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