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Ok here’s my poem I wanted to share with the world from when I was a messed up kid.

As I look around, I feel life is unfair
and I’m often filled with anger and despair.
People die against their own will
or there is some violence or some disease which makes them ill.

Nobody was around to save them when they begged and plead
So I ask where was our Lord in their times of need?
Yeah where the hell was he who acts so greatly,
why doesn’t he heal and make people happy?

I feel sometimes that I’m going to go in sane
nobody can stop this everlasting pain.
Sometimes I want to destroy everything in my path
I couldn’t give a sh1t if I feel Gods anger and wrath.

Then an inner voice says stop, slow down
don’t walk through life with such a frown.
Dark times come but then they disappear
and there is always someone who can lend an ear.

As dawn arises a new day arrives,
maybe the Lord did hear my cries.
I pray for happiness, health and love to come my way.
Let me try again on this brand new day.

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Anubis offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (1 minute after post)

We all hate ourselves
when we are just messed up kids
But we grow up strong.

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evansent 2008 offline Verified User (1 year, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (2 minutes after post)

well written
you should be proud of yourself :)

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Anubis offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (11 minutes after post)

Your poem is great
It speaks about your troubles
from when you were young

It shows there is a
way for people to move on
in their lives. Thank you.

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1 year ago (38 minutes after post)

Yes - I was troubled at that time. I figured though that each day is a new day and there is always hope and always people to help… we are never alone. It’s our attitude that changes everything, life is what we make of it. If we choose to let the light in and the darkness subside, it will happen. I feel it’s important to reach out to those in need - and I thought maybe my poem could help some people see that they are not alone in their feelings of confusion, anger and hurt and they can get through it. Peace x

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evansent 2008 offline Verified User (1 year, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (42 minutes after post)

who is this genius.show yourself at once :)

Anonymous wrote:
Yes - I was troubled at that time. I figured though that each day is a new day and there is always hope and always people to help… we are never alone. It’s our attitude that changes everything, life is what we make of it. If we choose to let the light in and the darkness subside, it will happen. I feel it’s important to reach out to those in need - and I thought maybe my poem could help some people see that they are not alone in their feelings of confusion, anger and hurt and they can get through it. Peace x

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Spangle offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (45 minutes after post)

MMMmmm ok here I am - hi.

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Anubis offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (46 minutes after post)

There ya go, take a bow.

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evansent 2008 offline Verified User (1 year, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (46 minutes after post)

spangle…….seriously well done :)

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evansent 2008 offline Verified User (1 year, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (46 minutes after post)

see my words of wisdom always come in handy lol!

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Spangle offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (48 minutes after post)

LOL yeah cheers I guess :-) Just wanted to open up there.. felt I needed to share a poem I wrote albeit 10 years ago..but a poem all the same through the journey which is my life. Hope it helps people in some way.. maybe, I don’t know.

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Spangle offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (50 minutes after post)

I mean I hope it helps people… maybe it will. I hope nobody gets offended by the religion thing… just I was brought up Methodist Christian and had asked for help but the pain wasn’t taken away at that time. I guess it just came up in my poem. I often wrote many poems when I was younger, don’t think I can write that way now. I just write when I have a strong feeling about something.

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evansent 2008 offline Verified User (1 year, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (55 minutes after post)

i too used to write poems,2 of mine got published :)
im also a methodist

i see youve changed your pic

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Spangle offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (56 minutes after post)

Yes it was getting on my nerves LOL. I was also drawn to the wolve pic so changed it to that.. not sure how long it will remain for. I would be interested in reading your published poems.. are there any web links to them?

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evansent 2008 offline Verified User (1 year, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (59 minutes after post)

yep but i closed them all due to someone leaving an extremely vulgar remark to my dead sister

i dont kno how send links

ill add you as friend then ill find them&invite you,k?

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Spangle offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 2 minutes after post)

Ok yes.

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evansent 2008 offline Verified User (1 year, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 6 minutes after post)

i cant find them so ill do 2 more posts :)

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Spangle offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (7 hours, 7 minutes after post)

Mmmmm not sure why replies were removed *confused face*!!!

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