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NEW POEM TERZA RIMA FORM IT’S FOR A GRADE READ IT PLEASE

Ignorance

Deny the progress! Take this meaning’s life,
And wash them clean until their soiled smell
Has stained the nostril walls invoking strife.

Oh lie and cheat, reserve your place in hell;
Without your stupid hollow thoughts abound,
And make with haste a better home to dwell.

Like colored windows, tainting sight and sound,
Are hate and cold reluctant ways of thought.
Withdraw this barking deathly looking hound.

Conserve the shallow pointless words not bought.
When change alone is worst of many fears,
And hopeless lessons seed the malice sought.

Deny the mother’s river’s deep with tears,
With open eyes pursue another dream,
To make the lies of yesteryear sincere.

Are stars illusive, bright and shiny schemes?
Like a hungry man who’s crying, hiding a knife.
Repair the tattered twine of value’s seam.

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Mat6974 offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 7 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (2 minutes after post)

OH its by me Mathew Mayes

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Srinh offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (7 minutes after post)

that’s really good.

my favorite part was,

Are stars illusive, bright and shiny schemes?
Like a hungry man who’s crying, hiding a knife.
Repair the tattered twine of value’s seam.

very nice.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (6 days, 2 hours after post)

VERY SUBLIMINAL…..IF YOU’RE GOING TO WRITE GREAT POETRY…YOU MIGHT AS WELL MAKE MONEY….GO TO redbubble.com….sign up…..post your work…and win the contest. Type in your search bar…..poetry contests…enter everyone and win. U can actually get a writing scholarship for as good as u are. The library has that info….friend of mine won 10 grand, got paid to go to new york, got an instant job, plus her apartment paid for and her writings were not as good as yours. YA MIGHT AS WELL LIVE YOUR DREAM!!! When ya visit redbubble.com…type in the search bar….”DARK RELECTIONS OF A LOST SOUL”…..wrote it trying to find closure for a friends suicide.
UPDATE ME ON ALL THIS…..WHEN YA GET THERE…REMEMBER THE LITTLE PEOPLE.

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Srinh offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (6 days, 9 hours after post)

right juh.

what is this. get published and win the contest if you buy an anthology of poems?

Please.

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juhur7 offline Verified User (1 year) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 12 months ago (3 weeks after post)

no…its a way of appreciating fine art, poetry, & short stories from future famers…and what the heck ya might as well go for the money while your there…

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