tricky invited 37 users to read this post 1 year ago.
I like your peom, another title for it could be “Set yourself free” At least it reads like that to me.
lovely, it’s so insightful. thank you for sharing this with me.
“we sell ourselves not to be lonely”
that is so true…but we really don’t have an alternative, do we? we need people, and in order to have people, we must become like them. it really is an endless cycle of self-destruction.
cool
i hope that you are saving all your great peoms adn put them in a book….
thep wrote:
I like your peom, another title for it could be “Set yourself free” At least it reads like that to me.
thanks for the idea ^_^
tristessetoujours wrote:
lovely, it’s so insightful. thank you for sharing this with me.
ur most welcome ^_^
tristessetoujours wrote:
“we sell ourselves not to be lonely”that is so true…but we really don’t have an alternative, do we? we need people, and in order to have people, we must become like them. it really is an endless cycle of self-destruction.
well you really dont have to be like them , but being around ppl , you somehow become a bit like them…
Anonymous wrote:
cooli hope that you are saving all your great peoms adn put them in a book….
maybe i will do that thanks for the idea ^_^
Very good poem Tricky :) but I wouldnt call it self-destruction. It is what it is,thats all.
I really enjoyed this read. As with the other from you, a writer in the making is quite pleasingly obvious. Thank you for the invite :)
Excellent, with LOTS of meaning T !
thanks everybody for your nice comments ^_^
=D great as always tricky !
~Starlight~ wrote:
=D great as always tricky !
sorry you read this before i guess i forgot not to invite you , my bad ^_^
A sad, but truthful thought…I think this is how most people feel. Everyone has their own story, issues and recovering mechanisms. True, most people seek other people (thinking this will make them happy). Remember, nobody can Make You Happy, happiness is within. I think of all the trials and tribulations in my life and they have molded me like a slab of clay waiting to be “something” and you know what? You are the something that your life has made you…if you didn’t go through the things that God has put in front of you…you would not be the person you are today. Yes, you may be somewhat confused at this point in your life…that’s ok…it’s normal…you seem to be in your 20’s….I am 44 (almost) and have learned all my lessons the hard way but, I wouldn’t change that for anything. People say I am the happiest and most carefree person they have ever met and YES that’s how I feel…there is no reason to mope, feel neglected, miserable or angry. Everything happens for a reason and there will always be something good thats follows something bad…(something bad that happens to you…may seem bad at the moment…but it is always for the better!!! You must wake up with a smile for someone everyday (I wake up with a smile for everyone because that’s what I am meant to share with everyone). It is amazing for 1)to be alive, 2)be vertical, 3)show up for anything 4)to breath 5)to open your eyes…..life can be so difficult (it seems) and so cruel…always remember YOU ARE HERE FOR A REASON and to keep the earth revolving and the natural way of things to keep moving YOU MUST BE HERE…You ARE a Piece of this most complex universe that must not be lost so, believe in yourself and be assertive as to who you are and NEVER let anyone undermine, overshadow, belittle or accuse you of anything you are not about. Stand up for yourself./..you wil gain respect and then you will meet the person who completes you…not who you think makes you happy. HAPPINESS COMES FROM WITHIN!
michellepeppin wrote:
A sad, but truthful thought…I think this is how most people feel. Everyone has their own story, issues and recovering mechanisms. True, most people seek other people (thinking this will make them happy). Remember, nobody can Make You Happy, happiness is within. I think of all the trials and tribulations in my life and they have molded me like a slab of clay waiting to be “something” and you know what? You are the something that your life has made you…if you didn’t go through the things that God has put in front of you…you would not be the person you are today. Yes, you may be somewhat confused at this point in your life…that’s ok…it’s normal…you seem to be in your 20’s….I am 44 (almost) and have learned all my lessons the hard way but, I wouldn’t change that for anything. People say I am the happiest and most carefree person they have ever met and YES that’s how I feel…there is no reason to mope, feel neglected, miserable or angry. Everything happens for a reason and there will always be something good thats follows something bad…(something bad that happens to you…may seem bad at the moment…but it is always for the better!!! You must wake up with a smile for someone everyday (I wake up with a smile for everyone because that’s what I am meant to share with everyone). It is amazing for 1)to be alive, 2)be vertical, 3)show up for anything 4)to breath 5)to open your eyes…..life can be so difficult (it seems) and so cruel…always remember YOU ARE HERE FOR A REASON and to keep the earth revolving and the natural way of things to keep moving YOU MUST BE HERE…You ARE a Piece of this most complex universe that must not be lost so, believe in yourself and be assertive as to who you are and NEVER let anyone undermine, overshadow, belittle or accuse you of anything you are not about. Stand up for yourself./..you wil gain respect and then you will meet the person who completes you…not who you think makes you happy. HAPPINESS COMES FROM WITHIN!
this is how i think
http://help.com/post/210282-where-the…
http://help.com/post/114025-poem-by-t…
thanks for the advise man , good luck withe everything ^_^
It was i nice poem i love to write poems about life because i had a not so good life i have been i care my whole life
but nice poem
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11 months, 2 weeks ago (1 month, 2 weeks after post)
It’s like, walking a thin line between what is and what could be.
Loved it. (:
Anonymous wrote:
It’s like, walking a thin line between what is and what could be.
Loved it. (:
are you a writer of some sort ?
am glade you liked it ^_^
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11 months, 2 weeks ago (1 month, 2 weeks after post)
Nah :)
But your poems are great!
Anonymous wrote:
Nah :)
But your poems are great!
oh k
thank you very much for your nice comments ^_^
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