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My short story, an interview with an undead.

Welcome back to CNN news this is Anna Shanon and tonight i am interviewing a very special guest. Many people know his kind to be mindless, vicious, monsters but we have evidence to the contrary. “Thank you anna” Said a deep raspy voice from across the room. The man limped to a chair next to anna, set his walking cain aside and sat down. He had scars and stitches all over his face, white glossy eyes and grey pealing flesh. The man said “Hello anna it is an honor to be here.” Thank you said anna it’s a pleasure having you on the show. So mister.. Zombie? What is your name? Tell us about yourself. He leaned back into his seat and spoke “My name is Trent Cloverfeild, i was born in 1983 at seguin texas, reborn in 2003. I was born into a middle class military family who put me through collage and of corse the military. In August 2003 i was shipped to the Iraqi war, after one month in service i was bitten on the hand by a senile Iranian woman. My hand became infected with what we thought at the time was gangrene, i went back to the states for treatment but i died on the flight and was reanimated on willcox airforce base.” “Wow.. Truly an amazing story” said anna. “How you survived as a zombie all these years.” “Well quite simple really, i take good care of my body and i know a good plastic surgeon.” said trent. “Then how come you have so many scars and stitches on your face?” asked anna. “Thats one of the few disadvantages of the undead, because i have no pulse or blood flow i can not heal.” said trent looking down at the floor bashfully. “You have no pulse?” Anna inquired. “I’m the walking dead” Said trent with an angered tone. “I’m sorry if i upset you trent” anna said. “It’s fine” said trent in a calmer voice. “We are running out of time so we need to wrap this up.. Umm what zombies are most known for is their insatiable taste for human flesh, what is you reaction to that?” Asked anna. “It is true anna that us zombies have quite a taste for your flesh but some of us including me have learned to control our hunger. I myself have substituted raw meats like lamb and beef but human flesh is much better tasting.” “Have you eaten a real person before? Anna asked with angst in her voice. The camera closed up to his face as he said.. “Yes.. i have killed and eaten a person before.” Anna Gasped in disbelief. Is this interview over? Asked trent. Anna screamed for security, trent jumped from his seat and attacked anna, biting her neck, pealing her flesh from the bone, her blood squirted every where. A security guard pulled him off of anna and put him in a choke hold, trent reached for the guards head and ripped it from his body. Further attacking the camera man and screaming innocents turning them into zombies.Trent attacked the whole news station crew infecting every person in the building. While all the violence was taking place the people at home witnessed the horror unfold, after the panic stopped, the blood was still dripping from the camera lens. The camera panned into focus of trent sitting calmly covered in blood, anna sitting at the arm of his chair. He began to speak. Hello america i’m sorry but i had to show you what one humble zombie can do. I was sent here as a messenger for my race, my message is that we are among you and we will rise to power. We now have complete control of this TV station. People at home watching the TV gasped in horror, then their TV screens went white.

The zombie uprising has begun.

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (9 minutes after post)

uhh, sounds pretty reminiscent of interview with a vampire….just a different kind of undead.

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Seguin, TX, US | 1 year ago (12 minutes after post)

I haven’t read interview with a vampire yet but yeah the it was inspired from it.

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Gloversville, NY, US | 1 year ago (7 hours, 7 minutes after post)

wow… what a story… and an imagination… how neat that would be if you could continue writing… making a book out of this.. im sure you would have a world of readers that are into this kind of thing… screw the 200 on car insurance.. you could own an insurance company… lmfao.

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Seguin, TX, US | 1 year ago (7 hours, 48 minutes after post)

lol thanx me and michelle are going to make a comic strip out of the story, she’s a really good artist. I was thinking about being a writer.

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My short story, an interview with an undead.

Welcome back to CNN news this is Anna Shanon and tonight i am interviewing a very special guest. Many people know his kind to be mindless, vicious, monsters but we have evidence to the contrary. “Thank you anna” Said a deep raspy voice from across the room. The man limped to a chair next to anna, set his walking cain aside and sat down. He had scars and stitches all over his face, white glossy eyes and grey pealing flesh. The man said “Hello anna it is an honor to be here.” Thank you said anna it’s a pleasure having you on the show. So mister.. Zombie? What is your name? Tell us about yourself. Trent leaned back into his seat and spoke “My name is Trent Cloverfeild, i was born in 1983 at seguin texas, reborn in 2003. I was born into a middle class military family who put me through collage and of corse the military. In August 2003 i was shipped to the Iraqi war, after one month in service i was bitten on the hand by a senile Iranian woman. My hand became infected with what we thought at the time was gangrene, i went back to the states for treatment but i died on the flight and was reanimated on willcox airforce base.” “Wow.. Truly an amazing story” said anna. “But what i want to know is how you survived as a zombie all these years.” “Well quite simple really, i take good care of my body and i know a good plastic surgeon.” said trent. “Then how come you have so many scars and stitches on your face?” asked anna. “Thats one of the few disadvantages of the undead, because i have no pulse or blood flow i can not heal.” said trent looking down at the floor bashfully. “You have no pulse?” Anna inquired. “I’m the walking dead” Said trent with an angered tone. “I’m sorry if i upset you trent” anna said. “It’s fine” said trent in a calmer voice. “We are running out of time so we need to wrap this up.. Umm one thing that zombies are known for is their insatiable taste for human flesh, what is you reaction to that?” Asked anna. “It is true anna that us zombies have quite a taste for your flesh but some of us including me have learned to control our hunger. I myself have substituted raw meats like lamb and beef but human flesh is much better tasting.” “Have you eaten a real person before? Anna asked in horror. The camera closed up to his face as he said.. “Yes.. i have killed and eaten a person before.” Anna Gasped in disbelief. Is this interview over? Asked trent. Anna screamed for security, trent jumped from his seat and attacked anna, biting her neck, pealing her flesh from the bone her blood squirted every where. A security guard twice trents size pulled him off of anna and put him in a choke hold, trent reached for the guards head and ripped it from his body. Trent attacked the whole news station crew biting and infecting every person in the building. While all the violence was taking place the people at home witnessed the horror unfold, after the panic stopped and the blood dried on the camera lens. The camera panned into focus of trent sitting calmly covered in blood sipping a glass of blood. He began to speak. Hello america i’m sorry but i had to show you what one humble zombie can do. I was sent here as a messenger for my race, my message is that we are among you and we will rise to power. People at home watching the TV gasped in horror, then their TV screens went white.

The zombie uprising has begun.

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Shawno*i'mback!* edited this post 1 year ago. Read the previous text »

My short story, an interview with an undead.

Welcome back to CNN news this is Anna Shanon and tonight i am interviewing a very special guest. Many people know his kind to be mindless, vicious, monsters but we have evidence to the contrary. “Thank you anna” Said a deep raspy voice from across the room. The man limped to a chair next to anna, set his walking cain aside and sat down. He had scars and stitches all over his face, white glossy eyes and grey pealing flesh. The man said “Hello anna it is an honor to be here.” Thank you said anna it’s a pleasure having you on the show. So mister.. Zombie? What is your name? Tell us about yourself. He leaned back into his seat and spoke “My name is Trent Cloverfeild, i was born in 1983 at seguin texas, reborn in 2003. I was born into a middle class military family who put me through collage and of corse the military. In August 2003 i was shipped to the Iraqi war, after one month in service i was bitten on the hand by a senile Iranian woman. My hand became infected with what we thought at the time was gangrene, i went back to the states for treatment but i died on the flight and was reanimated on willcox airforce base.” “Wow.. Truly an amazing story” said anna. “But what i want to know is how you survived as a zombie all these years.” “Well quite simple really, i take good care of my body and i know a good plastic surgeon.” said trent. “Then how come you have so many scars and stitches on your face?” asked anna. “Thats one of the few disadvantages of the undead, because i have no pulse or blood flow i can not heal.” said trent looking down at the floor bashfully. “You have no pulse?” Anna inquired. “I’m the walking dead” Said trent with an angered tone. “I’m sorry if i upset you trent” anna said. “It’s fine” said trent in a calmer voice. “We are running out of time so we need to wrap this up.. Umm one thing that zombies are known for is their insatiable taste for human flesh, what is you reaction to that?” Asked anna. “It is true anna that us zombies have quite a taste for your flesh but some of us including me have learned to control our hunger. I myself have substituted raw meats like lamb and beef but human flesh is much better tasting.” “Have you eaten a real person before? Anna asked in horror. The camera closed up to his face as he said.. “Yes.. i have killed and eaten a person before.” Anna Gasped in disbelief. Is this interview over? Asked trent. Anna screamed for security, trent jumped from his seat and attacked anna, biting her neck, pealing her flesh from the bone her blood squirted every where. A security guard twice trents size pulled him off of anna and put him in a choke hold, trent reached for the guards head and ripped it from his body. Trent attacked the whole news station crew biting and infecting every person in the building. While all the violence was taking place the people at home witnessed the horror unfold, after the panic stopped and the blood dried on the camera lens. The camera panned into focus of trent sitting calmly covered in blood sipping a glass of blood. He began to speak. Hello america i’m sorry but i had to show you what one humble zombie can do. I was sent here as a messenger for my race, my message is that we are among you and we will rise to power. People at home watching the TV gasped in horror, then their TV screens went white.

The zombie uprising has begun.

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (9 hours, 34 minutes after post)

well, you should go for it. follow your heart and do what you want to do. team effort sounds cool
a couple of suggestions though,
dont take other peoples ideas. this has already been done with Interview with a vampire, people dont really bother with plagiarized stuff.
and 2, make sure you use paragraphs. its very hard to read in this format.

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (1 day after post)

Dude, awesome. I think it was greatly written.

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