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ye he seems strong minded. i just hope he dosen’t do what all presidents do (ie sit back and go “ahh **** it im the boss i can do what i want, forget about the people that need help”) lol

i cant see anything wrong with it, cept overpowers is one word.

That was very well written :D

superloser wrote:
ye he seems strong minded. i just hope he dosen’t do what all presidents do (ie sit back and go “ahh **** it im the boss i can do what i want, forget about the people that need help”) lol

aint that the truth…

Thats wonderful!! Only change i’d make would be a positive or passioniate leader instead of A good leader in/A good leader is someone……

A good leader(comma) in my opinion(comma) offers change for the better.

A good leader is someone who has a vision of the future; a rational plan for achieving that vision(comma) and someone who can inspire others to work on that(”the”) plan and(”to”) achieve (”it” instead of “that vision”)that vision.

Through his actions a true leader inspires others to do more and become more. (More what?)

With this in mind, I think Barack Obama would be a great leader.

Like anyone, he has(shows or admits) flaws,(no comma) but his intelligence, respect(comma) and leadership over powers(”overpower”) any flaws(impurities or imperfections. Don’t use flaws twice. It’s repetitious) he might have.

Good work! Sorry, I’m kind of a grammar snob.
It was very heartfelt and honest, I liked it a lot!

as long>; as you can understand something i dnt think grammer matters. in the end we are animals comunicating!!?!?/”!/.:@ why not do it in the shortest and quickest way, .;,.;: just my opinion ) ()”\][+ :D

A good leader, in my opinion, offers change for the better. A good leader is someone who has a vision of the future, and a rational plan for achieving that vision. Also leaders need to beable to inspire others to work on that plan and achieve that vision. Through their actions a true leader inspires others to do more and become more. With this in mind, I think Barack Obama will be a great leader. Like anyone Obama has flaws; however his intelligence, respect, and leadership overpowers his flaws.

just change the “goods” and “greats” into different words

superloser wrote:
as long>; as you can understand something i dnt think grammer matters. in the end we are animals comunicating!!?!?/”!/.:@ why not do it in the shortest and quickest way, .;,.;: just my opinion ) ()”][+ :D

lol….try telling the english teachers this and they’ll probly drop dead

lol. wow would everyone please stop pointing out the “grammar mistakes” and focus on the beautiful message it contains !! :D

What does “()”][+ :D” mean in English?

it was a delibrate misuse of punctuation meant as a joke/moral to show that even if there is an error in the text the most important thing is that you can still understand it, also :D is a ’smiley’ face. :D

from the way it is posted i got the impression that the poster wanted it fixed for an essay or something
sorry if i misunderstood….

I think K is asking for help to improve this… so I am going to throw in:

intelligence, respect and leadership over power[s] take out the “s” since it is a compoun noun and thus plural

Nice concise definition… do you have to show how Obama meets the definition? I mean include a sentence that shows that he has inspired many?

so that is why you were asking about Obama in the other post… :-)

*country girl* wrote:

superloser wrote:
as long>; as you can understand something i dnt think grammer matters. in the end we are animals comunicating!!?!?/”!/.:@ why not do it in the shortest and quickest way, .;,.;: just my opinion ) ()”][+ :D

lol….try telling the english teachers this and they’ll probly drop dead

I’m still alive ;-)

Did you see this post?.. kind of cool: http://help.com/post/210565-tihs-is-c…

lol…i love that stuff

fengshuisweetheart wrote:

*country girl* wrote:

superloser wrote:
as long>; as you can understand something i dnt think grammer matters. in the end we are animals comunicating!!?!?/”!/.:@ why not do it in the shortest and quickest way, .;,.;: just my opinion ) ()”][+ :D

lol….try telling the english teachers this and they’ll probly drop dead

I’m still alive ;-)

Did you see this post?.. kind of cool: http://help.com/post/210565-tihs-is-c…