Out of Element-
I absolutely consider poetry to be apart of language, and language to be “my element;” however, wrting a poem is so delicate, decisive, and deeply emotional and it, in my mind, must be roughly perfect (comas! luckily I do not hold my help.com posts to the standard).
*title suggestions are welcome
Context beneath a weathered cover,
Completely original plot
Dynamic character list,
Totally over thought
Intellectual,
Slipping untaught
The title
dot dot
Comments, questions, great thoughts?
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nice. it has a perfect flow to it. simple yet intriguingly deep. i like it.
Moo Shu wrote:
wow totally out of element
Do you mean for the title? Or do you mean that you know me enough to judge that writing a poem is out of character for me? haha
Daksha Cromwell wrote:
nice. it has a perfect flow to it. simple yet intriguingly deep. i like it.
You think so? I wanted to rebirth the proper use of the word “totally” too, so it isn’t just a stereotypical surfer dude phrase (moo you did nicely to use ‘totally’ in your comment and I believe you liked the whole so- out of parentheses) Thank you both Moo and Daksha ^_^
not a problem. it’s nice to see people actually creating things nowadays. to many people only watch tv or surf the computer. the beauty of human interaction will soon be lost.
Daksha Cromwell wrote:
not a problem. it’s nice to see people actually creating things nowadays. to many people only watch tv or surf the computer. the beauty of human interaction will soon be lost.
Totally (undoing contradiction of the west coast), I threw the day away watching YouTube videos and pitying myself for not being more attractive and socialable. I also thought how easy one might fall into a similar hole and poster the crumbling walls… That experience may have been the inspiration for writing (I hate to think I have to use such intense negative motivation everytime) haha
well negative motivation is now the easiest to come by. it’s so much easier to say you can’t then to say you can try and it’s so much easier to say that no one else can if you can’t. sad isn’t it?
Daksha Cromwell wrote:
well negative motivation is now the easiest to come by. it’s so much easier to say you can’t then to say you can try and it’s so much easier to say that no one else can if you can’t. sad isn’t it?
Yes, and I mull over specific alternatives, but it is no Google search..
hmm for some reason i cannot change my location. it remains “An Unknown Location” very depressing. lol
Daksha Cromwell wrote:
hmm for some reason i cannot change my location. it remains “An Unknown Location” very depressing. lol
You suddenly want me to know where you live or something? ;)
maybe… nah i’m just irritating me cause it always says unknown. lol
Daksha Cromwell wrote:
maybe… nah i’m just irritating me cause it always says unknown. lol
Mine doesn’t match my profile, which suggests one of them is lying…
Aha- just unknown to this dimension, so airy!
0_o’
i am really just here to bring about the down fall of the corruption in modern day society. lol
Daksha Cromwell wrote:
i am really just here to bring about the down fall of the corruption in modern day society. lol
As we touched on before, I believe there was even some presetting for the latest such movements. And I may have been involved… (still think loafing is a good tool for bringing about a revoe lu si’on)
haha i know. the plan is still on right?
Daksha Cromwell wrote:
haha i know. the plan is still on right?
Well, clearly. Here we are, in full council, discussing the matter.
well we’re missing the other person. i cannot remember her name, seeing as she changed it. lol it was similar to yours though
I didn’t forget (her at least- commitment is questionable) “world_wanderer?”
yeah. she now goes by the title of “The Beat Goes On” she is currently MIA.
Mmm- need to address tracking her down then! By the context of her previous name, this may be a difficult task..
hmm my agreement is given. and it works. :D
Daksha Cromwell wrote:
hmm my agreement is given. and it works. :D
“Prove it!” Where is the proof? (had to do proofs in math class ever?)
prove that the picture stuff works? why your own shoutbox helps me. (not yet but i can’t wait for a debate where you have write an essay about how the paper you are writing on isn’t really there.)
That is an interesting one- I would like to come up with a hypothesis or so for that one.
Daksha Cromwell wrote:
prove that the picture stuff works? why your own shoutbox helps me. (not yet but i can’t wait for a debate where you have write an essay about how the paper you are writing on isn’t really there.)
Oh! No, nothing in particular. You just used the words “given” and “works” in the same reply..
my argument is this… “What paper?” the end lol
Daksha Cromwell wrote:
my argument is this… “What paper?” the end lol
If you are devoted (stubborn) enough, that could work (irritate). hmhm
hmmm. i’m going to say that i’m stubborn enough. lol
Daksha Cromwell wrote:
hmmm. i’m going to say that i’m stubborn enough. lol
Bold-
Daksha Cromwell wrote:
yet honest. lol
What’s questionable about being stubborn?
the degree to which the stubbornness is presented in the individual
Daksha Cromwell wrote:
the degree to which the stubbornness is presented in the individual
That part I get, but I consider it to be more neutral- it simply doesn’t budge! ha ha ha
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