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Out of Element-

I absolutely consider poetry to be apart of language, and language to be “my element;” however, wrting a poem is so delicate, decisive, and deeply emotional and it, in my mind, must be roughly perfect (comas! luckily I do not hold my help.com posts to the standard).

*title suggestions are welcome

Context beneath a weathered cover,
Completely original plot

Dynamic character list,
Totally over thought

Intellectual,
Slipping untaught

The title
dot dot

Comments, questions, great thoughts?

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Moo Shu offline Verified User (1 year) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (1 minute after post)

wow totally out of element

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Daksha Cromwell offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (7 minutes after post)

nice. it has a perfect flow to it. simple yet intriguingly deep. i like it.

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (10 minutes after post)

Moo Shu wrote:
wow totally out of element

Do you mean for the title? Or do you mean that you know me enough to judge that writing a poem is out of character for me? haha

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (13 minutes after post)

Daksha Cromwell wrote:
nice. it has a perfect flow to it. simple yet intriguingly deep. i like it.

You think so? I wanted to rebirth the proper use of the word “totally” too, so it isn’t just a stereotypical surfer dude phrase (moo you did nicely to use ‘totally’ in your comment and I believe you liked the whole so- out of parentheses) Thank you both Moo and Daksha ^_^

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Daksha Cromwell offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (24 minutes after post)

not a problem. it’s nice to see people actually creating things nowadays. to many people only watch tv or surf the computer. the beauty of human interaction will soon be lost.

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (36 minutes after post)

Daksha Cromwell wrote:
not a problem. it’s nice to see people actually creating things nowadays. to many people only watch tv or surf the computer. the beauty of human interaction will soon be lost.

Totally (undoing contradiction of the west coast), I threw the day away watching YouTube videos and pitying myself for not being more attractive and socialable. I also thought how easy one might fall into a similar hole and poster the crumbling walls… That experience may have been the inspiration for writing (I hate to think I have to use such intense negative motivation everytime) haha

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Daksha Cromwell offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (40 minutes after post)

well negative motivation is now the easiest to come by. it’s so much easier to say you can’t then to say you can try and it’s so much easier to say that no one else can if you can’t. sad isn’t it?

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (51 minutes after post)

Daksha Cromwell wrote:
well negative motivation is now the easiest to come by. it’s so much easier to say you can’t then to say you can try and it’s so much easier to say that no one else can if you can’t. sad isn’t it?

Yes, and I mull over specific alternatives, but it is no Google search..

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Daksha Cromwell offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (54 minutes after post)

hmm for some reason i cannot change my location. it remains “An Unknown Location” very depressing. lol

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (1 hour after post)

Daksha Cromwell wrote:
hmm for some reason i cannot change my location. it remains “An Unknown Location” very depressing. lol

You suddenly want me to know where you live or something? ;)

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Daksha Cromwell offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 4 minutes after post)

maybe… nah i’m just irritating me cause it always says unknown. lol

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 8 minutes after post)

Daksha Cromwell wrote:
maybe… nah i’m just irritating me cause it always says unknown. lol

Mine doesn’t match my profile, which suggests one of them is lying…

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 8 minutes after post)

-or maybe BOTH

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Daksha Cromwell offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 9 minutes after post)

haha. maybe mine is true O.o

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 14 minutes after post)

Aha- just unknown to this dimension, so airy!
0_o’

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Daksha Cromwell offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 16 minutes after post)

i am really just here to bring about the down fall of the corruption in modern day society. lol

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 25 minutes after post)

Daksha Cromwell wrote:
i am really just here to bring about the down fall of the corruption in modern day society. lol

As we touched on before, I believe there was even some presetting for the latest such movements. And I may have been involved… (still think loafing is a good tool for bringing about a revoe lu si’on)

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Daksha Cromwell offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 29 minutes after post)

haha i know. the plan is still on right?

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 36 minutes after post)

Daksha Cromwell wrote:
haha i know. the plan is still on right?

Well, clearly. Here we are, in full council, discussing the matter.

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Daksha Cromwell offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 37 minutes after post)

well we’re missing the other person. i cannot remember her name, seeing as she changed it. lol it was similar to yours though

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 40 minutes after post)

I didn’t forget (her at least- commitment is questionable) “world_wanderer?”

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Daksha Cromwell offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 43 minutes after post)

yeah. she now goes by the title of “The Beat Goes On” she is currently MIA.

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 45 minutes after post)

Mmm- need to address tracking her down then! By the context of her previous name, this may be a difficult task..

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Daksha Cromwell offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 47 minutes after post)

hmm my agreement is given. and it works. :D

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (2 hours, 6 minutes after post)

Daksha Cromwell wrote:
hmm my agreement is given. and it works. :D

“Prove it!” Where is the proof? (had to do proofs in math class ever?)

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Daksha Cromwell offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (2 hours, 8 minutes after post)

prove that the picture stuff works? why your own shoutbox helps me. (not yet but i can’t wait for a debate where you have write an essay about how the paper you are writing on isn’t really there.)

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (2 hours, 28 minutes after post)

That is an interesting one- I would like to come up with a hypothesis or so for that one.

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (2 hours, 29 minutes after post)

Daksha Cromwell wrote:
prove that the picture stuff works? why your own shoutbox helps me. (not yet but i can’t wait for a debate where you have write an essay about how the paper you are writing on isn’t really there.)

Oh! No, nothing in particular. You just used the words “given” and “works” in the same reply..

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Daksha Cromwell offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (2 hours, 42 minutes after post)

my argument is this… “What paper?” the end lol

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (2 hours, 49 minutes after post)

Daksha Cromwell wrote:
my argument is this… “What paper?” the end lol

If you are devoted (stubborn) enough, that could work (irritate). hmhm

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Daksha Cromwell offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (2 hours, 55 minutes after post)

hmmm. i’m going to say that i’m stubborn enough. lol

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (2 hours, 57 minutes after post)

Daksha Cromwell wrote:
hmmm. i’m going to say that i’m stubborn enough. lol

Bold-

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Daksha Cromwell offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (3 hours after post)

yet honest. lol

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (3 hours, 7 minutes after post)

Daksha Cromwell wrote:
yet honest. lol

What’s questionable about being stubborn?

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Daksha Cromwell offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (3 hours, 10 minutes after post)

the degree to which the stubbornness is presented in the individual

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wordfarer offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (3 hours, 22 minutes after post)

Daksha Cromwell wrote:
the degree to which the stubbornness is presented in the individual

That part I get, but I consider it to be more neutral- it simply doesn’t budge! ha ha ha

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