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Lie in bed all day, where has the time gone?

?

Family’s getting angry, no one knows what’s going on

Her pain is overwhelming, so she finally decides

She doesn’t want to live anymore, she decides to end her life.

Everyone is shocked, feelings so **** low..

No one really notices the poor 15 year old girl

Now she’s all alone and confused about her life..

Who will really notice when she takes to the knife?

Of course there are whispers, who will question her will

She comes to school broken, took too many pills

In her heart she knows she’s hurting all of her friends

But most are too busy to care, caught up in the trends..

She breaks down one night, feeling all alone

she calls her best friend, gets her mom on the phone

Feeling so forgotten, she doesn’t want to feel so cold

Her emotions flood forward, anger and hate are uncontrolled

She hates herself so much, feeling like a failure

Everything she wants turns towards disaster

Falling away, she wishes for some soul

To save her from her meaning, to no longer be whole

And she’s dead.

((I wrote this poem..I think it’s good, so criticize all you want))

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alcove87 offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (5 minutes after post)

i like it. nice job!

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An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (18 minutes after post)

Thanks!!! =]

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