A song for my dad.
RIP dad.
What do you guys think of this song so far that i wrote for my dad, i literally just sat down and wrote it a few minutes ago and i wanted an opinion from someone that i dont know so here it is, it isnt finished by the way.
Im looking up at the sky,
Wondering wether your looking back at me,
Wish i could see your face again,
Just one more time,
To say goodbye.
Can you see me looking up at you,
Can you hear me talking to you,
Are you looking down at me,
Are you talking back to me,
Why did it happen to you,
Why did it target you,
Why, why, why
You didnt deserve it.
Thats it so far, just to make ‘Why did it target you’ a bit clearer he died of cancer, so it refers to cancer coming to him, if any of you have any suggestions feel free to, well suggest, im not a songwriter of any kind i just felt a bit down so i wrote that for him even though he will never see it, so well thats it.
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