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*…I’ll not be whisked off tonight,
not able to live in my dream.
Just maybe..
I’ll find it in a dream as I rest my mind.
Ohhhhh what ever can I say? This art of words has moved me to my soul. Awed. Yea awed is what I am.
Thank You, Billy.
This—-is—–beautiful. Edie
Thank you.. I felt sort of bad before posting it here because it wasn’t a request for help. So I compromised with myself by saying that maybe it would help to put a smile on a few faces. I’m glad it did for you. Have a wonderful day.
It sure did, Billy. You have a wonderful day as well. Never stop dreaming. Edie
I think everyone is right there with you , feeling the breeze on their face :-) Beautiful hon!
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I told someone I would post something and shout to them when I did, so here it is.
An Island..
Walking in the dark,
unwinding,
I look down the street,
past the rise,
where the streetlights dance in formation.
The gulf wind takes bites out of the clouds.
It’s just an evening stroll.
making time for thought,
marking steps to a music in my head.
Silence as again I meet my shadow under the lamplight.
Hoping for an island of calm,
with a tree I’ll call hope.
Beautiful sand beaches,
palms swaying gently in tropical breezes.
Azure coves and colorful fishes.
Where time stands still.
The rhythm in my footfalls a cadence,
isn’t beating time to a listening ear.
Who really cares?
The distance between me,
and the island with the tree is significant.
I wish for it to be so much closer,
I wish to be transported,
in the blink of an eye,
but it’s refused.
The wish remains ungranted,
I’ll not be whisked off tonight,
not able to live in my dream.
Just maybe..
I’ll find it in a dream as I rest my mind.
(for edie)
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I told someone I would post something and shout to them when I did, so here it is.
An Island..
Walking in the dark,
unwinding,
I look down the street,
past the rise,
where the streetlights dance in formation.
The gulf wind takes bites out of the clouds.
It’s just an evening stroll.
making time for thought,
marking steps to a music in my head.
Silence as again I meet my shadow under the lamplight.
Hoping for an island of calm,
with a tree I’ll call hope.
Beautiful sand beaches,
palms swaying gently in tropical breezes.
Azure coves and colorful fishes.
Where time stands still.
The rhythm in my footfalls a cadence,
isn’t beating time to a listening ear.
Who really cares?
The distance between me,
and the island with the tree is significant.
I wish for it to be so much closer,
I wish to be transported,
in the blink of an eye,
but it’s refused.
The wish remains ungranted,
I’ll not be whisked off tonight,
not able to live in my dream.
Just maybe..
I’ll find it in a dream as I rest my mind.
(for ~edie~)
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awwwww *deep sigh* B, this is just, I can’t find the right word, just totally and outstandingly beautiful.Whenever I read it, it just reads even better than the time before. Once again, Thank YOU.
Are you still dreaming, B? I am. You have a beautiful mind….
Love you—Edie..
Thank you dear one.. and yes, I am still dreaming, and writing, lol.. I love it.
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:) “The gulf wind takes bites out of the clouds.” :) So cute!
Lovely, really.
Running off to invite number 2! LOL
Thanks B.! :D :)
This site is so slow tonight. I have to go have supper now. I’ll be back for the remaining ones before bedtime.
Thank you, Barely! :)
YW.. and we are all in chat on LUM.. hope you can join us later.. see ya..
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I told someone I would post something and shout to them when I did, so here it is.
An Island..
Walking in the dark,
unwinding,
I look down the street,
past the rise,
where the streetlights dance in formation.
The gulf wind takes bites out of the clouds.
It’s just an evening stroll.
making time for thought,
marking steps to a music in my head.
Silence as again I meet my shadow under the lamplight.
Hoping for an island of calm,
with a tree I’ll call hope.
Beautiful sand beaches,
palms swaying gently in tropical breezes.
Azure coves and colorful fishes.
Where time stands still.
The rhythm in my footfalls a cadence,
isn’t beating time to a listening ear.
Who really cares?
The distance between me,
and the island with the tree is significant.
I wish for it to be so much closer,
I wish to be transported,
in the blink of an eye,
but it’s refused.
The wish remains ungranted,
I’ll not be whisked off tonight,
not able to live in my dream.
Just maybe..
I’ll find it in a dream as I rest my mind.
(for ~edie~)
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