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How was she suppost to know that kissing his flawless lips would lead to the largest punishment of her life?

This punishment, she thought, I deserved. Yet what she didnt realize was something her parents did, and that was, my friend, she deserved to live. Nobody knew why she was plagued with this horrible disease, people only knew why she was overcomed with it. Of course nobody could resist those flawless lips, the black, sleak hair drooping over those electric blue eyes. Everybody decided, however, that for the best, they would avoid him. This one lady, who couldn’t resist the temptation is now laying in a hospital bed, coughing up a red substance. She looked over the side of her bed with all her strength to see who was beside her, and saw a small woman, possibly a child. Her hair was completely gone, maybe it was invisible - oxygen tubes running up through her nostrils. The lady’s back shivered as she thought of the flawless lips once more, and thought: What if she, the little girl on the bed next to me, too, could not resist a simple set of lips?

I don’t know. I like to write and sometimes I have to force myself to finish peices. But this one just popped up in my head, and I was worried I was going to forget it. I quickly searched a place to write it down, and then realized: I should post it on help.com, and see what other people think of my sudden brain storm. NOTE: MY SPELLING IS HORRIBLE. I DID NOT HAVE THIS ON WORD BEFORE I PUT IT ON HERE, SO SORRY FOR ANY SPELLING/GRAMMAR MISTAKES.

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elyak9 offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 11 months, 2 weeks ago (18 minutes after post)

thanks.

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An Undisclosed Location | 11 months, 2 weeks ago (8 hours, 10 minutes after post)

I enjoyed it. Thank you :)

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