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MY AIM TO BE GOOD WRITER MADE ME WRITE THIS..

ITS A COMBINATION OF AIM AND MODESTY AND ENCOURAGEMENT AND AN URGE FOR FAME

At time they ask
how I figure my words
how I select few,
among the herds.
to this I say-
if only
I was right
could i say how I write..
if only,
(my words were like pearls
soflly entangling in twists and curls.
each personifying a bead
to the string to be woven..,)
could i say my words
were rightly chosen
if only,
(it is praised by all folks
and in them
my feels ,its provokes)
if only
(it brings a smile or a sigh,
a laugh or a cry,)
could I sAy my feels were strong
which throughout will prolong..
if only
(like “sonnets”
my rhymes were given a different name
reputed they were
a symbol of fame)
if only
(they become so fantastic
to become an “all time classic”)
if only
EACH EYE URGED FOR ITS SIGHT
COULD I SAY HOW I WRITE

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Sans offline Verified User (1 year, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 57 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (2 minutes after post)

very clever!

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qtdeedee0 offline Verified User (1 year, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (23 minutes after post)

wow i loved it! it was different n it was just very nice good job!

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An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (27 minutes after post)

thnxx

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