Just something I wrote and wanna get your opinion on…
This is something I just wrote in occasion of my friend’s sister’s death (posted previously). It’s titled “don’t let me go”. Just read it and tell me what you think:
The time has come
for me to move on.
But I’ll be watching over you
from morning till dawn.
Don’t grieve over me.
I’m gone to a better place.
Yet, there’s one thing bothering me,
it’s seeing your sad face.
You say you’ll miss me.
I know it’s true.
But you don’t have to;
cause I’m right here with you.
Just go on with your life
like you did when I was there,
Try to cope with the responsibilities.
I’m sorry, I know it’s not fair.
The most precious things,
they are unseen.
Like the connection between us,
that is there, and always has been.
I did not just vanish.
I’m right here.
Feel me, hear me,
just defeat your fear.
Believe me I’ll never be really gone.
I’ll never let you alone.
I’ll always be where I used to be,
as long as you don’t let me go.
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