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“I Promise”

“You won’t hurt,”
Promised the girl,
To the knife,
As it left a bloody pearl,

She didn’t understand,
How blood shed,
Hurt less,
Than having him dead,

Rivers of red,
Of pain,
Unless someone notices,
She’s perfectly sane,

Each day,
She promises her knife,
“You won’t hurt,
Until I take my life,”

She plans,
Plots,
Too many choices,
Pick a straw, take lots,

On her day,
Of reckoning,
Her knife whispers,
Beckoning,

“I won’t hurt you,”
It calls,
And for her own lies,
She falls,

“I won’t take long,”
The knife says,
She believes it,
Tries not to make a mess,

She holds her knife,
Holds it tight,
Closes her eyes,
Shuts out the light,

“You’ll be with him soon,
I promise,”
The knife cuts,
A last kiss,
The girl dies,
Bliss.

Bliss hurts.

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southern_comfort offline Verified User (3 years, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 6 #
An Undisclosed Location | 12 months ago (5 minutes after post)

Girls talking to knives…. I thought Alice was strange talking to candlesticks and teapots.

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12 months ago (8 minutes after post)

normal is strange, reality is painful

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12 months ago (35 minutes after post)

I can work the words to suit my mood…

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AreWeAllTheSame offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Unknown Location | 12 months ago (45 minutes after post)

i liked it. there is nothing wrong with expressing yourself in any way shape or form. it was well written.

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SingerInPurple offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Undisclosed Location | 12 months ago (58 minutes after post)

Nice poem.
Make sure it doesn’t become reality!

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accountcancelled. offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 7 #
An Unknown Location | 12 months ago (1 day, 1 hour after post)

Thanks, I shall try to keep it as a poem.

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