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Ok so i wrote a song and was hoping for some feedback, beware kinda depressing.
Oh and if you don’t like it and think it sucks could you like not be too harsh please and thank you. Still a draft too.
you’ve wondered off the road that’s you
and you don’t understand how you’re supposed to get back
the road is out of sight and you’re a little lost
going in circles and no one hears your cries
you just wanna bolt and get the hell out
and just as you feel yourself escape
a voice drags you back into the darkness
a million voices in your head
just to drive you insane
so you take off
to hell with them
they can take their advice and put it the ground
but it doesn’t matter in the end
except that you’re on a one way track
and there’s only one way off
you gotta jump
so you take off
and the minute you do
they disappear one by one
and your left with you
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