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through all my life you made me dead…

hmmm…..not sure if ive posted this before. but it doesnt hurt to try again.
this style of poetry is kind-of different. but anyways.

-Through All My Life You Made Me Dead-

~
through all the
Lies
i swim away
~
through all the
Tears
that cant be seen
~
through all the
Hurt
that mussnt stay
~
through all the
Pain
i just scream
~
through all the
Love
that i cant see
~
through all the
Voices
i cant hear
~
through all the
Friends
made for me
~
through all the
People
that i fear
~
you are the
Cause
for me to tear
~
you are the
Voice
thats in my ear
~
you are the
Scource
of all my fear
~
you are the
One
who through the spear
~
through all the
Hurt
i hurt no more
~
through all the
Pain
that you imbed
~
through all the
Love
i was unsure
~
through all my
Life
you made me dead
~

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Bogdan (Gone) offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 11 months, 4 weeks ago (22 minutes after post)

Nice :D
Different yes, but it doesn’t change the effectiveness of the imagery or the splendour of it all. Well done.

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Mez offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 11 months, 4 weeks ago (1 hour, 40 minutes after post)

That was really good. Thanks for invite =]. You are good at writing poetry =].

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Rotech927 offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 7 #
An Undisclosed Location | 11 months, 4 weeks ago (10 hours, 8 minutes after post)

Deep! Very good!

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