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And so a smile means the world,
For spinning sunshine’s shadows and the moon light drift,
We revel in the idea of ourselves and ask our futures for the answer,
Each turns to its counterpart and smiles,
And so a smile means the world.
Realising you are alone with yourself,
You make peace pacts with the voices in your head,
To let the thoughts you keep calm,
Accepting the differences,
From this reality and the ideal world.
Well, it’s very good for 30 seconds in my opinion… I don’t think I’d be able to write a poem even if you gave me an entire day.
that wasnt very good :P……….im going to challenge you lol,,,,,,,,,,,,dont know why as i dont stand a chance……….
ok acceptance people lol……….
looking into the distance
you see your reflected image.
knowing you will never catch up to the idea
of what you are.
looking back, you feel pain and anguish
and yet over come by all of that
there is happy ness.
like a child on their knees,
with a crayon in their hand…
you sketch an image of the perfect you……
knowing that the perfect you
will never be accepted.
for what we see in ourselves,
we see in others to.
dont really know where i was going with that, but oh well lol……..and that took me like 10 minutes to write lol
and as you can see i have no idea how to write….
Hey learning to breathe,
how about a poem on strength and determination?
Thanks.
well u can do prose if you want- just dont make it a 1200 word essay or i will fall asleep!
Lol, it was just a comment but still. I’ve just gotta pop out for an hour or so
The say mimic is the greatest flattery
I say cease before I begin battery
I am of course kidding, you know it,
It is great to see more poet
Nice post, good to see my idea took off. :D
Strength is not bravery,
With bravery you have a choice,
Thoughts are not slavery,
You still have a voice,
Strength happens when the person
Realises there is nothing left,
And they keep going on,
Determination is not commitment,
Commitment is planned before hand,
Things which is present,
As stones and sea sand,
Determination is required in time,
You never thought would occur,
When you’re going through hell,
Keep walking.
I totally forgot to get back to this post :)
Wow I love it, especially the first section. Brilliant.
Im gonna copy it to my desktop and ponder some of the lines.
Thankyou!
Hi Learning,
You could at least say Hi,Hello, How are you? That applies to you.
Hope your having a Merry Old Christmas Time,
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Prose and poetry on demand.
I loved Bogdan’s post so I am setting up one.
To Bogdan if you want me to close this post merely tell me and I shall oblige.
So yes, a word or phrase and I’ll write you a poem or piece of prose, if you specify.
(I am so bored I am writing English essays.)
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