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Im not a poet, I know it.

I just started thinking and this is what came of it.

I give everything.
A piece here, a piece there.
A chunk here, a chunk ther.
Ive given everything i have to give.
I give and I give and I give.
Ive given all but one piece.
The smallest yet most important piece.
This piece I dont want to just give away.
What piece is this you ask, a piece not worth giving?
Its my heart silly, yours as long as Im living.

It might not really make sense, but yea just random thought.

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Bogdan (Gone) offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 11 months, 2 weeks ago (6 minutes after post)

That is rather sweet if I do say so.

Poetry is an emotional expression. Even if it seems to lack skills to other people, it is still yours. Keep at it :D

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lachiu offline Verified User (11 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 11 months, 2 weeks ago (1 hour, 8 minutes after post)

I disagree, that was nice. Very nice.

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*Dougie* offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 11 months, 2 weeks ago (10 hours, 8 minutes after post)

That made no sense!
Bogdan gave it his appreciaton and so did you?
How are you disagreeing then?

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Kanabi offline Verified User (1 year, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 11 months, 2 weeks ago (13 hours, 30 minutes after post)

awww! Thats cute!! I like it!!

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антихрист offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Undisclosed Location | 11 months, 1 week ago (1 week after post)

i liked it, very nice

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