life help: i wrote a song and was hoping for some feedback, i wrote it a few years ago so my writings changed but i tried not to touch it.

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i wrote a song and was hoping for some feedback, i wrote it a few years ago so my writings changed but i tried not to touch it.

if you don’t like it could you not be too harsh please and thank you.

Verse 1
Life can get bad, but it changes
We change our life with every choice
Everyday we choose a different path
Never staying still too long

Chorus
For better and for worse
Taking time to see whats around us
Questioning everything we do

Verse 2
Life changes for a reason
Even though we might not understand it
We go with it

Chorus
For better and for worse
Taking time to see whats around us
Questioning everything we do

Tag
But we never stop

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barely 3 #
An Undisclosed Location | 11 months, 1 week ago (20 minutes after post)

Can I make a change or two?

Anonymous #
11 months, 1 week ago (21 minutes after post)

sure

barely 3 #
An Undisclosed Location | 11 months, 1 week ago (21 minutes after post)

Also whats the beat or give me a tune closely associated with it.

Anonymous #
11 months, 1 week ago (23 minutes after post)

There not really an official beat or anything so whatever you think sounds best is fair.

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An Undisclosed Location | 11 months, 1 week ago (40 minutes after post)

Gonna need to think about it, hum a tune in my head a bit..I’ll get back to you on it later..

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