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so bogdan whats up?

the sky!!!! haha lol sorry had to say it
anyway that poem is really good you should try and publish it or something i did that once and got £150 considering im only a teenager thats quite alot haha x

Bogdan wrote:
Nothing much. You?

nothing

so how are you holding up?

Bogdan wrote:
Well, I am not dead. I resisted the urge to stab myself because blood is too messy and I dont want to hurt my gf. Overall, I think that is not so bad.

im glad nobodys gonna lose blood but you just dont sound so good

a very good plan haha

Bogdan wrote:
Where do I do that? I have a lot that could get published apparently.

and sorry i just looked for my book and couldnt find it just search on google for poetry publishing or a competition or something ..x im sure u wil find a way x

Bogdan wrote:
I have issues that cannot be resolved my mortal means. I trust the divine grace of God to lead me as he does when I pray. Probably sounds a little strange, but that is what I hold onto. Hope.

maybe a profesional would be a good idea?

Bogdan wrote:
Nah, I am fine. Trust me. I am not going to do anything. If it gets too bad, I will see a professional though.

thank you but maybe talking to a docter about meds?

May I change to suit me???

It seems this is it
a final goodbye
Obvious in rhyming
I just want to die.

Carry me yonder,
Where the skies bleed like rain
Wash away tears,
So they cause no more pain.

Incomplete in design
and lacking in stature,
Self wrought destruction
as I kneel at the rapture.

This is merely expression,
How can love hurt so much,
But I will not give in
lest I lose her sweet touch.

Thought I may make a few changes, but feel free to discard all of them, this is me not you and I understand completely..

I like it, it’s, well, beautiful is what you’d call it… and very impressive.
I can barely make two sentences rhyme.

Bogdan wrote:
I prefer it my way, but if you want to take it like that, then by all means do so. Doesn’t bother me. :D

To each his own, I’ll not change yours, it’s your heart and words, everyone has their own view of any situation, I’ll honor yours it’s your post.

Good job.. ‘b’

The night wrote:

Bogdan wrote:
I prefer it my way, but if you want to take it like that, then by all means do so. Doesn’t bother me. :D

sorry it just seems like your pretty depressed

And geeeze, it’s poetry not psychology 101, guys..

lilkitttenr66 wrote:
the sky!!!! haha lol sorry had to say it
anyway that poem is really good you should try and publish it or something i did that once and got £150 considering im only a teenager thats quite alot haha x

where did you send it to be published?

Typical, repetitive, dull emo nonsense.