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huh? changed the tags on this post: they were "life, Love, girl" 11 months ago.
huh? changed the tags on this post: they were "life, Love, girl, Feel, Thought" 11 months ago.
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Here’s another poem for you people out there to criticize.
Like before, I just want ya to pick at it, find what’s wrong with it, and basically, be as mean as ya want to be. Haha. No fake compliments, please. I hate them.
A Lasting Impression
Like a willful wind,
Dispatching the remainder of Autumn’s colorful coat from high above,
To nestle below, warming to the core,
A life hidden beneath.
It was a glimpse of a glistening beauty,
Sought after as a valuable amenity,
Like the sun on the horizon of a new day,
Awakening us from the darkness which we reside.
A window pane of time and space, you remain,
Within my view, without my touch,
A nonfictional part of my visual imagination,
The remnant of a dream dreamt inconclusively to get to know you.
Your smile spoke deep within me,
And made me realize I’m without you…
But your smile embraced me,
Now I’m smiling alongside you.
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