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poems…

again :)

she wakes up
from that dreadful night
as she turns
to see her only true friend

not there
missing perhaps?
perhaps
she is now panicing

she heads out of the glass bedroom
she once called theirs
as she walks
she sees the unbelievable bloodlyy tracks

she walks down the stairs, scared
more blood on the way down
is this her best friend?
she looks over the railings

she just sees more blood
now she is running
panicing
where is the phone?

she gets down to the stairs
she sees the body
of her best friend?
she cannot tell

she goes futher down the hallway
closest to where the murder has happened?
perhaps
but then she sees a shadow past

and she feels something touching her shoulder
and she wakes with a scream
it was her best friend waking her up
from the nightmare, we now call reality

please tell me if youu lke it….comments please?

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Helixer offline Verified User (11 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 10 months, 1 week ago (1 minute after post)

eerie
o.O

couple of spelling mistakes.

“panicking” “bloody” “pass”

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hannahx12 offline Verified User (10 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Unknown Location | 10 months, 1 week ago (2 minutes after post)

did u write these areacode705l?

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areacode705l offline Verified User (1 year, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 9 #
Friendship, ME, US | 10 months, 1 week ago (6 minutes after post)

yeahh i write these.

ohh thank youu helixer!

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hannahx12 offline Verified User (10 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Unknown Location | 10 months, 1 week ago (7 minutes after post)

well there not bad.

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areacode705l offline Verified User (1 year, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 9 #
Friendship, ME, US | 10 months, 1 week ago (9 minutes after post)

oh thanks youu?

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hannahx12 offline Verified User (10 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Unknown Location | 10 months, 1 week ago (13 minutes after post)

wat im trying to say is there good…does that ring a bell?
i started writing somthing along time ago then gave up. i diddnt think it was very good.

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hannahx12 offline Verified User (10 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Unknown Location | 10 months, 1 week ago (21 minutes after post)

yeah its really good.

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areacode705l offline Verified User (1 year, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 9 #
Friendship, ME, US | 10 months, 1 week ago (25 minutes after post)

oh thanks:)

i used to think myy stuff wasntt good. but i just put everything i write on here. andd test it out :) youu should too.

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hannahx12 offline Verified User (10 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Unknown Location | 10 months, 1 week ago (34 minutes after post)

i just did

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