A poem i just wrote. - Help.com

Himj
offline Verified (2 years, 7 months) Visit Himj's shoutbox
GB

A poem i just wrote.

I want your opinions on it, the effects and techniques you can see used.

Her.

She is over here,
Split,
Me,
and her.
He is just happy
with her, who is over here,
and i
over
there.
‘he’
Justs
sits
here
and
takes
up
space.
Destorys her fragile fragments of Friendship,
who is with me,
over here.
I cry.

This open post was written 9 months, 4 weeks ago | V/U/S: 194, 13, 3 | Edit Post | Leave a reply | Report Post


Reciprocity (0) Reciprocation Failure -- The poster has NOT helped anyone else yet!

Since writing this post Himj may have helped people, but has not within the last 4 days. Himj is a verified member, has been around for 2 years, 7 months and has 11 posts and 53 replies to their name.

Post Tags (0)

This post has no tags. Please, help out and add some! (How Tags Affect Reciprocity)

Replies (13)

Where were you?

Click and drag to move the map around. FAQ: How we place people on this map »
You can also watch events on Help.com as they happen
Mouse over the map for 2 seconds to see an expanded, interactive view

MortallyWounded offline Verified User (1 year, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 136 #
An Unknown Location | 9 months, 4 weeks ago (2 minutes after post)

Paints the picture very clearly! :’(

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Help me with: Download Songs
This reply has been removed.
This reply has been removed.
Himj offline Verified User (2 years, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
GB | 9 months, 4 weeks ago (5 minutes after post)

Its ment to be enjamblement. But the way this site works, doesnt let me have long spaces. :(
Dave, what image does it paint :) im interested to know

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
glamourboy offline Verified User (11 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 35 #
An Undisclosed Location | 9 months, 4 weeks ago (5 minutes after post)

*snaps*

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Help me with: We’ve reached a journeys end, goodbye help com, glamourboy is officially leaving.
This reply has been removed.
MortallyWounded offline Verified User (1 year, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 136 #
An Unknown Location | 9 months, 4 weeks ago (13 minutes after post)

Sounds to me like someone took your girl, possibly someone who is not very nice to her.

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Help me with: Download Songs
Himj offline Verified User (2 years, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
GB | 9 months, 4 weeks ago (13 minutes after post)

We never went out. We are just good friends.But that is the general message :)

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
MortallyWounded offline Verified User (1 year, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 136 #
An Unknown Location | 9 months, 4 weeks ago (15 minutes after post)

Himj wrote:
We never went out. We are just good friends.But that is the general message :)

I feel for you! has happened to me. Best wishes!

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Help me with: Download Songs
Himj offline Verified User (2 years, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
GB | 9 months, 4 weeks ago (19 minutes after post)

Hey, nothing bad has happend. Its alot worse. I just desided to do what sylvia plath did. Except the whole…killing myslef part.

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
MortallyWounded offline Verified User (1 year, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 136 #
An Unknown Location | 9 months, 4 weeks ago (21 minutes after post)

:)

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Help me with: Download Songs
This reply has been removed.
Himj offline Verified User (2 years, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
GB | 9 months, 4 weeks ago (29 minutes after post)

yay!

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators

Invite Others to Help

A logged in and verified Help.com member has the ability to setup a Friends List and invite others to help with posts.