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Aha ha, thank you. I was actually reluctant putting it there because it sounded “emo”.
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do ↔ don’t wrote:
Aha ha, thank you. I was actually reluctant putting it there because it sounded “emo”.
Well, for me emo is pretty much plain emotional, and not the stereotypical emo…
And I like emotional poems.
i knew you can do something what works for me ..Not bad…
Barbyman wrote:
i knew you can do something what works for me ..Not bad…
lol glad i could help
ok..what the eck was that!
i was happy before,now i feel pissed off lol!
come back vilen..all is forgiven ;)
i like it a lot. and i love the bridge. its good to know that there is at least one person in the world that can write good songs w/o the interference of a record label.
Musicsoccer12 wrote:
i like it a lot. and i love the bridge. its good to know that there is at least one person in the world that can write good songs w/o the interference of a record label.
Thanks very much, MS12. I appreciate that.
And thank you angie (no sarcasm intended)! I’m just glad you took the time to read it. :P
Yeah, it’s not supposed to be a happy song - it’s intended to make the reader think twice about this so-called “holiday” in a love paradise, which turns out to be a popular kids > geeks situation.
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A song for Valentine’s Day.
And it is actually called “Valentine’s Day”.
Some months ago I promised I’d write a ruthless, heavy, violent song, so here goes.
It may sound morbid, but it actually deals with the ruling of higher classes in schools. The jocks vs. the geeks. The sad truth is, physical strength always wins in schools.
Verse (slow):
In my pocket there is a corni-cello, yeah…
And when I fire it, the world… will… end…
I just want to please the dope gods
But this world is clouded by fog
So it looks like I’m so f–ked
Chorus (fast):
I will rise up high
And you will scream
I will always haunt
each one of your dreams
Everybody knows
I won’t cease to grow
I won’t take any
Of this s–t
Verse (slow):
I’m the only one who can say the word “love”…
Just keep walking, don’t look above…
I just want to please the dope gods
But this world is clouded by fog
And I will never rest peacefully
Chorus (fast):
I will rise up high
And you will scream
I will always haunt
each one of your dreams
Everybody knows
I won’t cease to grow
I won’t take any
Of this s–t
I will rise up high
And you will scream
I will always haunt
each one of your dreams
Everybody knows
I won’t cease to grow
I won’t take any
Of this s–t
Bridge (slow):
Black hearts scattered on the floor
I don’t care for you anymore
The time has gone and now you’ll see
That I only care about me
Chorus (fast):
I will rise up high
And you will scream
I will always haunt
each one of your dreams
Everybody knows
I won’t cease to grow
I won’t take any
Of this s–t
Chorus (fast):
I will rise up high
And you will scream
I will always haunt
each one of your dreams
Everybody knows
I won’t cease to grow
I won’t take any
Of this s–t
Everybody knows… !
Everybody knows… !
Everybody knows… !
Everybody knows… !
Chorus (fast):
I will rise up high
And you will scream
I will always haunt
each one of your dreams
Everybody knows
I won’t cease to grow
I won’t take any
Of this s–t
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