okay so im getting writers block, helppp pleaseyy

DayDreamer

okay so im getting writers block, helppp pleaseyy

its called “anymore”

everynight i lay awake thinkin bout you
wondering if your thinking boiut me to
starein out at the night scky
wipein the tears from my eyes

why dont you see me like you use to
my heart dosent flutter anymore
wanna talk to you but your so far away
dont wanna fell this way
anymore

hearing your name made my smile
seeing your face drove me wild
the first time i said hi yo you
it almost turned me blue
i’m falling in eveyway
i dont know what to do

it just dosent sound finished to me

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abbie.chal #
An Unknown Location | 9 months, 3 weeks ago (5 minutes after post)

why dont you think about what happens in everyday life thats what i do. so maybe like (this bits pretty rubbish) this can come everyday but never at all

my heart thumps aginst me
my life flashes before me!:)

soz this is really bad

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PollyinLove 8 #
An Unknown Location | 9 months, 3 weeks ago (9 minutes after post)

I think I have heard this before…Sounds like you might have used someone elses words by accident.

I think that by using other peoples suggestions in the poem it will stop belonging to you. Poetry is personal and no one else knows how you feel about it. So use your own words not other peoples.

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abbie.chal #
An Unknown Location | 9 months, 3 weeks ago (10 minutes after post)

yeah i guess so.

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Grim_Hardcastle 21 #
An Unknown Location | 9 months, 3 weeks ago (11 minutes after post)

everynight i lay awake thinking about you
wondering if you`re thinking about me too
stearing out at the night sky
wiping the tears from my eyes

why don`t you see me like you use to
my heart doesn`t flutter anymore
wanna talk to you but your so far away
dont wanna feel this way anymore

hearing your name made me smile
seeing your face drove me wild
the first time i said hi
you almost turned me blue
i’m falling in everyway
i dont know what to do

My heart is burning
my soul is lost
these days without you
make feel like a ghost

I want to live
without this desire
your my love, my life,
what i want to aquire

In the end i see us
under the sky
two souls together
feels so right don`t know why

How could we get there i ask you my friend
For you i will go all the way straight to the end.

Hope this gives you some inspiration.

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DayDreamer 2 #
An Undisclosed Location | 9 months, 3 weeks ago (15 minutes after post)

Grim_Hardcastle wrote:
everynight i lay awake thinking about you
wondering if you`re thinking about me too
stearing out at the night sky
wiping the tears from my eyes

why don`t you see me like you use to
my heart doesn`t flutter anymore
wanna talk to you but your so far away
dont wanna feel this way anymore

hearing your name made me smile
seeing your face drove me wild
the first time i said hi
you almost turned me blue
i’m falling in everyway
i dont know what to do

My heart is burning
my soul is lost
these days without you
make feel like a ghost

I want to live
without this desire
your my love, my life,
what i want to aquire

In the end i see us
under the sky
two souls together
feels so right don`t know why

How could we get there i ask you my friend
For you i will go all the way straight to the end.

Hope this gives you some inspiration.

you have seriously turned my song into i really heartfelt poem. i am filled with shock and admiration. “wow” i sone wor di could use to sum it up, but that does not even being to cover it.

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DayDreamer 2 #
An Undisclosed Location | 9 months, 3 weeks ago (16 minutes after post)

^^sorry for the spelling errors, i was typeing fast

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Grim_Hardcastle 21 #
An Unknown Location | 9 months, 3 weeks ago (33 minutes after post)

DayDreamer wrote:
^^sorry for the spelling errors, i was typeing fast

No problem..
You should be writing more. I see potential in you.

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