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OK so I wrote this story ending with no clue to what

the actual story is, so I was wondering if you could put feedback and what you think the most unforgivable and horrible thing a person could do is. Thanks It’ll really help.

I’m running and I can’t look back. I can’t see all their faces knowing what I did, what I’m doing. They can’t deal with it, and neither can I. I don’t belong…anywhere. No family. No friends. All that’s left is me, just the way it should be. No one notices. No one cares. We live in the world we do because of heros, but no one wants to be one. The world keeps spinning and I keep going. One day they’ll be another, just like me, and the world, well it doesn’t change.

Thank you again!

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An Unknown Location | 8 months, 2 weeks ago (5 minutes after post)

maybe somthing to do with you attempting to rescue the earth from the new world order…

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An Unknown Location | 8 months, 2 weeks ago (7 minutes after post)

The most unforgivable thing to me would be taking the life of another…especially if they were an innocent victim..But I love the ending haha I want to see the whole story when its done!

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An Undisclosed Location | 8 months, 2 weeks ago (1 hour after post)

I’m fine and have a great family (Sorry about yours). I am actually writing a story cuz I love writing about the parts of humanity that people like to pretend doesn’t exist. So I’m trying to get an opinion on what other people think as the worst thing that someone could do. I appreciate you offering to talk, but it’s not necessary.

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